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Artistic Aspirations

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, March 9, 2003

She begins,
with shallow respirations,
panting in time,
patterning her senses
into competitions of emotion,
chasing after
the perfect birth.

She ascends,
down into tornadoes,
cascading through tunnels,
cycling words blend,
sending out spirals,
contained within rainbows,
of artistic birth.

She expires,
obliterating Nirvana,
hushing her overflow,
relaxing her mind’s glow,
reeling in fragments,
she stretches with freedom,
of writer's birth.

Erin Moen
3/9/02
Copyright 2003 ©




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Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Oh and Oh and Ahhhhh, God, this is a masterpiece, to me, so...so extraordinary, and yes, the metaphors and flow...and this IS IT, the 'birthing'

Erin, Standing Ovation... perfect!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 13, 2003
Wonderful!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
La La La La hm hm da da
Oh sorry but have you ever read a poem that just sort of sings to you. You know when the flow is just perfect.

NO you Say!!!!
Well just scroll up and check it out.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Erin this is gorgeous writing...Flavia

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
masterful!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
wonderful use of words and metaphor, you have certainly "bithed" a winner here.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Excellent!

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
"down into tornadoes, cascading through tunnels ..." kind of like alice falling ass over teakettle down the rabbit hole ... writing is like that, labor and no holds barred. excellent write

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
You are good!

Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Erin your imagination is always expecting .
Great work .

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Erin, love this one. I could feel the pain of both mother and writer. Outstanding.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2003
Erin, you poetry is so fresh and enjoyable. You improve with each poem. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
refreshing, original motiff..

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
beautifully articulated...a great treament of the subject

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Well done Erin!
Jack

Reviewed on March 9, 2003
This is a green bough from the three of emotions dropping heavenly dews to fresh a soul's thirst.
I Salute You, Master Poet Erin Moen.
My gratitude, admiration and Benisons.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Loved the flow of this read. Great write.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Truly a stunning write Erin...Loved this very much! Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
I agree super metaphors here !!! Fantastic

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Lovely one

~E

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2003
Erin,
You just keep getting better and the metaphors excellent.
Flows dear.
Peg


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