First Breath
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, March 21, 2003
Finally she finds, her mind's desire,
rabid and clean, she's filled with fire,
no soul-less toil, factories death,
it's clear to source of first full breath,
the gift of sight, her world's delight,
is linking words of daily plight.
And she smiles.
At last the force, 'twixt mind and hand,
which painting foiled and drawing banned,
shoots forth in peals of joyful mirth,
it feels unearthly to fully give birth,
to wings of fur and word's huge girth,
ah, but
there is no measure
to artist's worth...
Erin Moen
8/6/02
I've always wanted to be able to draw, or paint, to create "pictures", this early piece is singing my joy that I found the "force" in poetry. I had been looking for it for 43 years...
Love from India - Joel -
Chrissie
You do poetry from your soul.
Excellent piece.
Peg
You have great talent....
The poem, "First Breath" is coming from a long way. It is what the heart makes in form with words of experience. I have enjoyed it.
I Salute the Author.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
All those years you wished you could create pictures was just your spirit..
screaming to write..
You just didn't know it..
Poetry is your art.
Loved this..
Erica
Good choice, and fine words.
~E