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First Breath

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, March 21, 2003

Finally she finds, her mind's desire,
rabid and clean, she's filled with fire,
no soul-less toil, factories death,
it's clear to source of first full breath,
the gift of sight, her world's delight,
is linking words of daily plight.

And she smiles.

At last the force, 'twixt mind and hand,
which painting foiled and drawing banned,
shoots forth in peals of joyful mirth,
it feels unearthly to fully give birth,
to wings of fur and word's huge girth,
ah, but
there is no measure
to artist's worth...

Erin Moen
8/6/02


I've always wanted to be able to draw, or paint, to create "pictures", this early piece is singing my joy that I found the "force" in poetry. I had been looking for it for 43 years...



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Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
Your poetry is unique and superb! I'm glad you finally realize it;-)

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
Erin, You sure paint lovely pics with your writing and poetry is also a form of song. So there you are. A Poet, A singer and of course a Painter.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
This is outstanding and I enjoyed it so much

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
Erin being and artist I so relate to this...and yes poetry is an art form and you dear girl are an artist...floria

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
enjoy reading your poetry very much ;)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
There were two things I always wanted to do in life, draw and sing. I can't draw a straight line using a ruler as a guide, and I can't sing to save my life, but I have poetry that sings and paints beautiful pictures, and have and gave birth to an artist and two musical kids. I, like you, have found my songs and they are more beautiful than I ever imagined. So paint us all your pictures from your soul and will will see them in our minds and hearts, dear poet.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
You are a gifted writer Erin. This is outstanding and I enjoyed it so much.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
Erin,
You do poetry from your soul.
Excellent piece.
Peg

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 22, 2003
Excellent.....gripping write...enjoyed much...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
I can feel your painting...
You have great talent....

Reviewed on March 21, 2003
"First Breath" is what it takes to feel poetry in. After that one is born.

The poem, "First Breath" is coming from a long way. It is what the heart makes in form with words of experience. I have enjoyed it.

I Salute the Author.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
You do create pictures and feelings
All those years you wished you could create pictures was just your spirit..
screaming to write..
You just didn't know it..
Poetry is your art.
Loved this..
Erica

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2003
Poetry is the artform of the soul.
Good choice, and fine words.
~E


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