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The Form of Seagulls, and Crows

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, March 28, 2003

Amazing grace, flew into my skies, today.
In the form of seagulls, and crows…

The spring air was filled with flimsy, barely-there
rain clouds, of such an insubstantial quality,
blue skies laughingly smiled in between.
A special day, as winds rummaged through
palm fronds, and hair. Showers fell, but never landed,
as they lauded the airs beauty, with whimsy.

It was my daughter, who saw them first…
She called me, to come and see. “Seagulls”,
she said…in Arizona? And, yes, two flocks,
one low, one higher, their wings are unmistakable.
I beamed with delight! Seagulls! Far away from home,
their beauty stretched into the gusting winds.

And just beneath the lower life’s dance,
was a pair of crows, my crows, from my life.

The ballet began…with the first chorus of seagulls,
swirling and mixing themselves into
a seethingly small aerial display of vaunted Life.
Already far up in the blue-apple sky,
they started exiting, or seeking wetter lands
then arid Copper’s Mountain could sustain.

The second band was lower, as if disclaiming
their loss of path, proclaiming their beauty
reason enough to travel further, and farther,
in “Jonathan Livingstone Seagull” style, pirouetting
on a wingtip, acrobatically mingling their
cloud-outlined silhouettes in complex wheels of wings.

And the ethereal mistiness of glowing skies, bedazzled
my hand-shaded eyes, mixed with upside-down ocean blue.

But it was the crows, the locally proud owners
of sky-learned lands, their birthright displayed
with the verve of loyal freedom, that swept my heart.
The aching joy I felt, as I watched the progress,
from east to west, created its own lively dance
in my soul, I felt gifted, with the phenomenal sight.

The heavily-bodied black birds, synchronized their forms,
perfectly artful and gracefully stanced to the mating of kind,
and the meeting of like minds, a birdly cohesion of awareness,
awesomely sublimed, as the entire entourage, with, perhaps,
the lower flock of seagull wings inviting their crow companions
to imbibe in the delights of windy life, gained unforeseen heights,

of spirituality…

It was a paradox ordained, a fellowship retained, it was Heaven,
earthly-bound, in respect to the normalness, of natural life.

Erin Moen
3/28/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Beautifuly writen...Please check out my poem "Seagull Medicine"..Blessings to you ~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
excellent write
wonderful imagery

William

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
everything They said
josie

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
What a beautiful image you have created. You have given these "lowly" birds the status of "physical angels on the wing" Good job.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Thanks for sharing the ballet with us! ~Joseph

Reviewed by Sandi Braveheart
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This is an incredible piece of writing. The imagry...the form...the energy...beautiful! ... creates an sustaining impression on the reader.

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
you and your daughter could have stopped with the exclaimation, "seagulls in arizona?!!?!?!?" but instead you brought it to the page. i love how you don't let anything slip by on any given day. -anne

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This was one of your very best works.

Reviewed on March 29, 2003
A beautiful write - very spiritual. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This is truy great stuff

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Stunning poetry. Very thought provoking work.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
This is very interesting write...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good Morning, Erin
Excellente!! You also write of Richard Bach, and Arizona. I really loved this, despite never seeing a sea gull down here.


ty
tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Erin,
"
It was a paradox ordained, a fellowship retained, it was Heaven,
earthly-bound, in respect to the normalness, of natural life. "
Excellent!!!
Peg

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
I agree--fantastic write...
Kudos, Erin!!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
Wow Erin!! This is truy great stuff....You're a fantastic writer. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
This is one of the most beautiful nature/spiritual poems I've ever read. Bravo Erin!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
This is beautiful, Erin.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 28, 2003
that was something else, so graphic...i've been wary of crows for years but you made them proud, stately creatures in this dance of life..wonderful work!


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