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GOD...?

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, April 12, 2003

What if...
every planet, sun
and moon
of all the galaxies
in all the universes
were each
but a single cell
of GOD?

What if...
each plane of existance
were linked,
like paper dolls
holding hands
and cut
from one infinite roll
of living paper?

What if...
we were a three-dimensional quilt,
uniquely
pieced together
by power unknown,
but admired and revered
as a greater force
of highest knowledge?

What if...
wear and tear
and fathomless time
creates black holes,
and small rips
and notches,
tiny mars,
in paper and fabric?

What if...
we spent our lives
repairing
the flaws we can see
with love and care,
to bring the whole
of the sum
to completion?

Do we wait, briefly,
on the center-spiral
and keep coming back
to mend
again and again?

Will we all have to "be"
an eternity old
to finally see?

Would we flee GOD, then,
when it is finished?

And with a big bang,
start again?

Erin Moen
10/22/02
Copyright 2002/2003 ©


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Reviewed by Tyrone Banks (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2004
Excellent thoughts to ponder. Reminds me of "Independence Day I" when the earth (or was it the universe?) was picked up and placed in a creature's marble bag...we want to believe that we are the largest things out there whearas, in reality, we are but small pieces of a larger creation!

Excellent Read!

Tyrone

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
G - good

O - order

D - Darling

You are in good hands here.....to be in His hands......GOD BLESS YOU and YOU and You and hopefully me

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
What if? Nice stroll down this road. J.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Erin, I love the voice of eternity and unity of all things in the universe presented in this work. It is well done, developed and presented. The questions are eternal and thought provoking. I like the way you think, will be back to read more.

Reviewed by Meg Leigh (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
I really liked this. A thoughtful and thought inspiring poem.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Thought provoking
I thought the universe was God?

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Very interesting

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
well written,wonderful thoughts
Excellent wrte

William

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
It all begins with love. Excellent.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Thought provoking and excellent, one i have written about too...what is hard for some to see is that god contains the Universe and all that's in it, not the universe contains Him. With that knowledge you can see that all things are in him and your theory works;-)It is my belief that there being no real time only a contiuum as we are all in one realm of it or another all contained and under His care, and if we acknowledged Him we could do much more to improve our condition...

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Beautifully thought-through and imaginative. I particularly admire the paper doll metaphor. You have managed to give a philosophical argument concrete form, yet also tickle the reader's fancy. What a
coup! Admiringly, Phyllis

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
"What if...
we spent our lives
repairing
the flaws we can see
with love and care,
to bring the whole
of the sum
to completion?"

Then we could all live happily ever after. Nice poem.

Reviewed by Constance Legters (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
I love the way you speak of this question asked by so many in voices too weak to hear.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
4-12-03

What If You Never Come Back Again Before Tomorrow__Big Bang!

TRASK

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
makes one pause and wonder.. Excellent questions, am glad I stopped in to read this tonight. Thank you for posting it..

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Excellent, and so thought-provoking,

Reindeer

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on April 12, 2003
Intriguing questions...
of course each of us tend to mar more than
we mend

good write

john+


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