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Unnatural Visions of Ourselves

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, April 16, 2003

(Our shining, cosmic spirits
are encapsulated, prisoners
of borrowed, earthy flesh,
to be placed,
indelicately perhaps,
on our now-world...)

She has freckles galore,
she sees them in the mirror,
and she hates them,
feeling marred, marked,
ugly...she is sure
that without them,
her true self she could explore.

(Forgotten are the heavens
traveled through, joyously,
and freely, as unencumbered spirits,
pulsing through cosmically charged dust
and greeting births of stars...)

He has tried to ignore
that he is slowly going bald,
he hates it,
feeling bared, inferior,
ugly...he is sure
with a full head of hair,
he could make the score.

(Quasars of living light
search to the unlimits,
souls tag along blithely,
diving into black holes
to explore otherwhen...)

She can’t stop eating, anymore,
it’s a vicious circle,
and she hates herself,
feeling stupid, huge,
ugly...she is sure
if she were skinny,
she would be unhappy no more.

(Spectacular vibration-scenery
and infra-radar clash,
and meld, and the spirits dance
in cosmic fireworks
of supra-expansion...)

His shortness, he has come to abhor,
women look down on him,
he hates himself,
feeling stunted, undersized,
ugly...he is sure
if he were taller,
he could get his foot in the door.

(As one by one, the souls are set free
from fleshy constraints,
the spirits blaze with beauty,
multi-colors flashing, unfettered,
souls of light, dipping and gliding,
into the heavens, our true
birthright...)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/18/02
 


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Reviewed by Thomas Mutchler
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
beautifully cryptic...and I can relate to the 4th stanza..nice wording

Tom

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
outstanding poem... bravo!

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
this was very deepp wisdom and truth nice job on this one

Reviewed on April 16, 2003
This was beautiful, you are an outstanding poet!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Erin, this was awesome. Excellent write. You leave me speechless.

Reviewed by Debra Brown (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Ahh, I love your poetic and beautiful soul self!!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
fantastic write...loved the back and forth...if only everyone would remember their true spirit...thank you for this!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Erin, A spectacular Vision of Light! I truly enjoyed this piece! ~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Truly outstanding write, I'm awed!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
BRAVO! this is exciting exquisite work with knowledge of what is "real" and what is just temporary;-) Love it!!!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Good Morning, Erin
Extremely thought provoking. Excellent write Ms.Arizona.


tony

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
now this is my kind of work. you are an eternal alpomegan, i see, identified by your memory of the light. lol...powerfully magical work, poet. keep on helping us all remember who we really are... :)

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Masterpiece...
I love how you switched from earthy worries to celestial lightness.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Erin,
"As one by one, the souls are set free
from fleshy constraints,
the spirits blaze with beauty,
multi-colors flashing, unfettered,
souls of light, dipping and gliding,
into the heavens, our true
birthright...) "
Loved the verses.
peggy

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Our biggest fault of all.


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