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Is There A Need?

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, April 29, 2003

Is there a need?

When a child screams, in silence?
Do we turn our backs, on innocence?

When a woman is beaten bloody?
Do we sluff it off, in uncaring rectitude?

When a drug addict overdoses?
Do we say, who cares, at our convenience?

Is it too much to ask, to see, to respond
to the epitome, of negligence?

Is there a need?

When a minority seeks equality?
Do we procreate, more furiously?

When a shriveled voice weakly pleads?
Do we unhear the extreme need?

When a nation fears its Head of State?
Do we demean, the religion it seeks?

Is it too much to ask, to see, to voice
continuances for eternity?

Is there a need?

When a newborn chick falls from its nest?
Do we step on its fragility, and end its Life?

When we can see, and live, freedom bought for the We?
Do we not comprehend the extent of morality?

When we shrug off human responsibility?
Do we not commit an unnamed crime?

Is it too much to ask, for us to see,
that Life is unfairly judged to be, even…

Is there a Need…?

Erin Moen
4/29/03


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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 2, 2003
there is definitely a need for more well developed poems as this one is...

Reviewed on April 30, 2003
This was powerful indeed, and so well said!

Excellent!


Reindeer

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Bravo!!!
Powerful write...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
You are a very caring and lovely soul with a huge heart..

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Supreme of a write !!!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Erin, you have posed the most important question of humanity, I hope someone hears it. Well done, my friend. Well done!.
bobbi

Reviewed on April 30, 2003
great write with a timely message, erin! well done! (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Excellent write, inspired message, lets hope we will act on it, not just read or write it!

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
I echo all...a brilliant piece, Erin
Chrissie

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Erin,
Your work always makes me think, take a step back, and re-evaluate situations! Bravo!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
ty ty ty
love this

When we shrug off human responsibility?
Do we not commit an unnamed crime?

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Thoughtful questions ... great write. Yes, there is a great need for humanity to turn from selfishness and greed. And the opportunities are there for us as individuals every day if we simply open our eyes. We can all be a blessing to others in need by commiting random acts of kindness everywhere we go. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Yes, a helping hand, a friend for all seasons, just someone to care! Terrific write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Hi Erin, Yes there is a need for more writings on this subject. There is also a need for you!


tony

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
You have grasped the problem.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
There is a NEED.. For people to not only open their eyes.. but their HEARTS!!! You know that thing God put in out chest.. the essence to our soul. This was fantastic!! Has more meaning to me than it should.
Thanks for posting it!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Erin, outstanding. Many valid questions. We are all vulnerable in one sense or another. Compassion is sorely lacking in this world today.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
Erin,
I love the ???'s yes there is a need for everything you questioned and then some,
We need to be more sensitive and comapssionate and stop being so blind as a civilazation and as individuals this is so thought provoking my dear.
Peggy

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2003
To oftern water flows down hill, we take the path of least resistance .. enjoyed the write J & J

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Thank you, Linda...THAT is what I needed to hear, ("I-the-egocentric"), do you hear? :) Sensitivity is not a birthright, it is foreborne, sometimes with worried trepidations, yet, the worth of such is indisputable. :) Which is why humanity can reach forwards, with its strenghth of individual Lives!!

Reviewed by Linda Murray
Reviewed on April 29, 2003
Yes the need is great. We just sometimes can't seem to know what to do next. It's sad but true the world needs you to keep writing your poems so you can tell us what to do next.


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