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I Am Not So Naive...

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, May 18, 2003

I am not so naïve as to think,
my small bit in continuing a living community
does not come across as equality…
I am not so sure what to think,
when a special touch may not be freed,
I wonder, about that equality,
but I am not so naïve…

I am not so smart as to think,
my fragility will not be exposed,
I could be you…I really am, combined
with the other yous, we are the same,
I am not so sure what to think,
when a world is so insecurely chinked,
I wonder, about sincerity,
but I am not so naïve…

I am not so blind as to think,
my resistance is purely my own design,
I am you…why do you question me like
I am not like you? We are the same.
I am now sure what to think,
we are the world, forever bedevil-linked,
I wonder, about humanity,
but I am not so naïve…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/18/03


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Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on May 20, 2003
very good!!! i'm glad ya not...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
thought provoking write!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Hey Erin! A wonderful thought provoking write...

Reviewed by Patrick Talty
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Erin, this poem affects me as do many Dylan Thomas poems that I do not really comprehend at first reading. I just like the sound and the free verse form at first; then gradually I absork the meanings at different levels.

So, I have put this one in my AD library and will go back to it initially for the pleasure of reading it again and then,at some point, for enlightenment. When that happens I'll let you know what I've discovered.

This is my first visit to your poetry pages; I look forward to many more over time.

Reviewed on May 19, 2003
I liked this, Loved this wonderfully written poem this morning,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Debs
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
typo..tis thought provoking

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Erin, excellent poem. Leaves one with such positive pondering.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2003
Thought provoking, powerful write.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
I'm to blimming niave:)))

great write

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
excellent my friend

William

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Excellent~
I'm not either...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Erin Excellent piece.
Peggy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
has a nice bounce to it...

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Yep...Been around that block a time or two..Great insight, Erin..

Love and peace, Dove

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Ditto on what Kate said...

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Dear Erin, Wonderful writing.


tony

Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Excellent work. Glad to be back and reading you again. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Naive you will never be but a good writer you are! Excellent work.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
you know what's important and that's what counts;-) a little Naivete'goes a long way;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
Keep a little of it. Nice poem.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2003
No one thinks for a minute that you are. well done


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