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Awareness

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

I sigh, as I see, the impossible, has captured me. Ambition.

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Thursday, July 3, 2003

The awareness of a natural talent
does not a Poet make.
The pains of birth, the insecurities,
cause her world to quake.

The rushing sounds, of life unbound,
do not a Poet make.
There is something more, the formal lure,
and, so, inside she aches.

She wants it all, clear bugles call,
ambition starts to wake.
Theory divined, in Life-filled mind,
she yearns to come awake.

The push and pull, furthered learning’s hall,
it slithers like a snake.
She wants it all, the final call,
of words, she will partake!

It’s not the form, they become the norm,
she hopes there’s no mistake,
she sees a light, in golden life,
she knows she’s not a fake.

Erin Moen
7/03/03
Copyright 2003 ©

I do not want to write for myself, I want to write for others. I want to write for others... Do idiosyncrasies dwell in the mind of a Poet? Yes, they do! :)


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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Very well written....you have it kid! Talent and the heart to fly as far as you want to go!

Great poem ty, Dani

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
You remain true to your heart and that's everything!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
Erin, me sweet, Not one person has mentioned how effortlessly you have continued the 2nd/4th lines rhyme scheme here.. no mean feat! You talk so openly to us, your readers, without shouting.. perhaps that is where your true talent lies.. you are able to clunk me (blissfully) with your provoking thoughts.. I always leave your work feeling smarter.. and inspired! A poet whose work I admire once said 'listen to your heart and write honestly what it tells you'.. When he said that, I thought of you. love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 5, 2003
great write my friend!!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Erin, I'm glad you decided to keep on keeping on. Your voice is most welcomed. Well said, and presented. Good job.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Erin....great write my friend....loved this much....superb!!!!

Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Hhhhhmmmmm!.....Interesting write and insightful here!

A great poet is one who can capture his/her audience with his/her own thoughts and words. When the audience think he/she is writing for them with his/her own thoughts then this poet is successful. Then it becomes this poet's own style.

Thank you for sharing!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
wonderfully written introspection...

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Fine work, dear lady. Kudos are in order.

Reviewed by Jason Wise
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
Wonderful poetry. Youre definitely not a fake, takes courage to realize that of yourself though.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 3, 2003
An excellent write
Enjoyed reading

William

Reviewed on July 3, 2003
This was wonderful, I loved this, agree with Emilie!

Reindeer

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Do what comes from your heart how ever you like. It's my secret ...if I had one. Write your pretty little heart out!

Emilie


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