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Heat

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, July 10, 2003

As the morning sun comes slashing,
desert heat seems everlasting,
mirage of water fools beholder,
fiery rays flare ever bolder.

Seeking shelter from perdition
weakens will and brings attrition,
woe to those who lack ambition
caused by loss of rains volition.

As the pyre grows ever hotter,
moving limbs becomes a bother,
collage of dreams hangs in the air
leaving psyche unquenched and bare.

Seeking solace from submission
fires the torch and brings cognition,
inner strength eyes composition,
blazing light writes its rendition.

Erin Moen
7/10/03
Copyright 2003 ©


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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2003
Nice flow and great descriptions, you can almost choke on the stultifying heat! Nice work!

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Yes this rocks. It flows oh so well. Great write. michael

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
fantasic creative effort!

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
this is fabulous Erin ...sadly it's freezing here at the mo :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
GREAT WRITE ERIN
EXCELLENT

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Erin....excellent write from you as usual....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Fantastic write!

Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Erin, this is truly an outstanding write with many wonderful lines.

Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Excellent and so Outstanding, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
beautifully written meter and rhyme, in this sultry write!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
"collage of dreams" <--- stopped me right where I sat, Erin.. God, I love when you get 'rhymey' and your words just march along.. I could feel this one, crescendos and all! This is really cool! (almost no pun intended.. hehe). You are a master at bringing the reader to right into the middle of what you're writing. Great job! love, katy.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Another excellent poem Erin!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Amazing imagery, can feel the heat.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Heat is the word! Especially where you're at, right? Blazing write. ;)

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Hot, hot the weather, hot, hot the poem. Great write, Erin.
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
In awe! Another excellent poem, Erin.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Erin, you did it again. Excellent rhyme and flow. Sometimes it's even too hot to breath.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 10, 2003
Wow, Erin! Great poem!


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