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Odyssey: Part III

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, July 24, 2003

Champagne tastes bland
compared to the rich textures,
the bubbling laughter
and the exquisite bouquet
of a family enriched Life...

7/22/03

Rejuvenesce

The early sun bequeathed it's life
to the dew drenched meadow. Killdeer
proclaimed their regeneration,
mosquitos recharged themselves
with her morning-fresh blood
as the vacationed day shortened itself
with every sweetened breath she took.

7/22/03

Disperse

Memories...so sweetly experienced,
retain the vivid quality of being lived,
golf course trees, then small
are now...giants,
once proud cocktail-houred lumber family
have all...dispersed.

Memories...so passionately lived,
as children in a quasi-golden age,
course through her veins,
she is now...small,
too proud after cocktail-hour bride,
she has...dispersed.

Memories...so wonderfully unique,
create the soulful way we seek,
our course becomes one-sized,
we are...tiny,
"How proud can we make ourselves?"
We all...disperse.

7/23/03

Alone

It's like...
looking up to heaven to see
a type of god gazing down at me,
plucking the feelings of all I see
in never ending eternity.

It's like...
living the planet's color scheme,
a type of god looking up at me,
sucking the feelings of all I see,
an ever-ending eternity.

It's like...
becoming an atom that you can see,
a type of being that's meant to be,
tucking away the feeling me,
a strange unending entity.

It's like...
being alone.

7/23/03
Erin Moen
Copyright 2003


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Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Hi, Erin!

Lots of originality here!

THIS image in particular struck me:

"as the vacationed day"

Your use of a PASSIVE voice participial adjective is most unusual, and most effective. ANY poet who has the insight to know how to pull this sort of thing off and GET AWAY with it has my kudos!

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA


Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Wonderfully done, Erin. I have to go back and read the other two now.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
This is excellent write....beautifully done...enjoyed this much....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
And they say you can never go back! Well, poo poo.
Beautiful write, Erin, flow and imagery. Thanks for tracking it for us.
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Fantastic ending! Great write.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
These are excellant Erin, and they progressed so well! Loved the verbal imagery you have used to convey your thoughts to us!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
wonderful thoughts!!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2003
Party on girl Reflection can sometimes be the best cure if were are to move ahead
a very thought provoking write indeed


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