Odyssey: Part III
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Thursday, July 24, 2003
Champagne tastes bland
compared to the rich textures,
the bubbling laughter
and the exquisite bouquet
of a family enriched Life...
7/22/03
Rejuvenesce
The early sun bequeathed it's life
to the dew drenched meadow. Killdeer
proclaimed their regeneration,
mosquitos recharged themselves
with her morning-fresh blood
as the vacationed day shortened itself
with every sweetened breath she took.
7/22/03
Disperse
Memories...so sweetly experienced,
retain the vivid quality of being lived,
golf course trees, then small
are now...giants,
once proud cocktail-houred lumber family
have all...dispersed.
Memories...so passionately lived,
as children in a quasi-golden age,
course through her veins,
she is now...small,
too proud after cocktail-hour bride,
she has...dispersed.
Memories...so wonderfully unique,
create the soulful way we seek,
our course becomes one-sized,
we are...tiny,
"How proud can we make ourselves?"
We all...disperse.
7/23/03
Alone
It's like...
looking up to heaven to see
a type of god gazing down at me,
plucking the feelings of all I see
in never ending eternity.
It's like...
living the planet's color scheme,
a type of god looking up at me,
sucking the feelings of all I see,
an ever-ending eternity.
It's like...
becoming an atom that you can see,
a type of being that's meant to be,
tucking away the feeling me,
a strange unending entity.
It's like...
being alone.
7/23/03
Erin Moen
Copyright 2003
Lots of originality here!
THIS image in particular struck me:
"as the vacationed day"
Your use of a PASSIVE voice participial adjective is most unusual, and most effective. ANY poet who has the insight to know how to pull this sort of thing off and GET AWAY with it has my kudos!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
Bobbi
Beautiful write, Erin, flow and imagery. Thanks for tracking it for us.
Leland
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
a very thought provoking write indeed