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Wednesday, August 20, 2003

Mixing maladies of mental memories
removes sensibilities
creating mayhem.

Twining terrors of trampling thoughts
removes patterns
begetting turmoil.

Seething sadisms of psychotic selfishnes
removes conscience
aborting system.

Roiling rigors of repulsive routines
removes gauges
skewing reactions.

Exiting echoes of eidetic explosions
remove inhibitions
becoming enactment.

Cutting cresencdo of caustic chaos
removes self
completing cycle.

Madman murders.

Erin Moen
8/20/03
Copyright 2003 �

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Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Excellent write...and I agree.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Erin, your alliteration is perfect for the theme.. gives it a rhythm that moves us to the conclusion.. an end result. You are so masterful at surrounding the reader, involving us completely. There are goose bumps in this one.. you write boldly! love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Erin....outstanding write my friend.....superb!!!!

Reviewed by Floreann Cawley

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Outstanding..Floreann

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Bravo, Erin! Great skill demonstrated here! Again, bravo!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

I felt him pacing in circles within my mind...to the rhythm of this piece.

~Jackie~

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Erin the topic is enhanced by the outstanding alliteration. This is a powerful and exceptional write, in every way!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

You know him well, "Madman" doesn't want to learn how to get richer without degrading his fellow humans.

This poem says it all as "Madman" is.

It has a smooth flow, the composition is superb, and the cadence excellente. It is a classic Free-Verse.

Thank You for sharing Your jewels.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Haunting and profound Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Reads to me like the two incidents in the mid east.
Wonderfully written as always, Erin.

tony:)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Wow, Erin, haunting, yet you describe so well the mind of a madman... excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Haunting and profound!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Great write, Erin. I think (but am not certain) that it elucidates an example of deviation from reality that I wrote of in the metaphysical part of my poem, Fuzzy Measures. Also, I learned a new word, eidetic -- unreal, but especially vivid.
The word characterizes the mindset of a number of people I have met over the years.
Thanks very much.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Brilliant! Bravo Erin.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Erin, outstandingly progressive.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 20, 2003

Excellent write!

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