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Forgotten Family

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, August 27, 2003

Sepia hues from shadowed trunks sparkled
under the glassy spring sun
and created an echoing time warp
through the overgrowth of the forested driveway.

The squawks of blue jays sharpened
as she neared the side of the abandoned house.
Cracked stone steps led down, into darkness,
into forgotten husbanding of canned goods
and dreams of unfulfilled fruition.

Following the vining weeds into full sunshine,
she stopped to shade her eyes
and peer at the huge old-fashioned barn, considered
the broken silo, wondered about the warped sheds
and rusty scraps of metal scarped in the tall grass.
The quiet sloughed through faint-memoried activity.

Turning towards the cracking façade of the large house,
she climbed into the past. The kitchen
was dimmed and unglorified, battered cupboards
left opened and storing ancient rodent’s nests. The heart
of the house was dead, silent except for her breathing.
Passing through the crumbling rooms was ghostly,
emptiness belied ever being loved, shattered windows
protested ever being occupied, peeling wallpaper
drew itself back from her curiosity.

An open trap door above lured her up shivering stairs,
into a wide-open loft of moldering debris. Boxes
of stained books, tatters of mouse-chewed clothes,
overturned crates of non-essentials, hallowed the whole
as apparitions danced between the motes in the air.
Picking up a small, dirtied rag doll, she moved to stand
in the fractured window-case, and stepped out of reality,
dreaming of the faded history
of a forgotten family.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/27/03
 


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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 29, 2003
Beautifully penned Erin!!
With vivid images!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Beautifully penned with vivid images. I love going through old houses, attics, and such. There is such a awesome mystery to it... like hanging out with the ghosts that once lived there. Wonderful write!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
Dear erin-nothing more can be expected of a fine art painting or poem but a stark and real description, choice word usage, and something conveyed that is universally relateable to.
my overactive mind was caught to rest (as the yielding lady in the window in the poem).

your friend marvin

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
You paint this picture of a tale vividly and yet not over done--it gives me the feel of perspective shards somehow glued back together to form a good piece of poetry. J.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
super write....BHUWan

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Erin, the imagery was so wonderful that I found myself walking those steps and entering that house. Fine piece of work here! Bravo!

Julie :)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Erin,
This is spectacular! You have done such a splendid super job of making sure this here family is never forgotten!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Hi, ERic!

Richard Vallance here again!

Well, well, well, you naughty, naughty BRILLIANT lil' ole' poet!

This is superb!

into forgotten husbanding of canned goods
and dreams of unfulfilled fruition.

You HAVE a handle on imagery, no doubt about it. You HAVE my blessings entering the AUTHORSDEN poetry contest September, 2003. I will not mince words. The majority of writers (who deem themselves poets) on the DEN are, unfortunately, simply versifiers. You know and I know it.

But, as for you.... let your genius glow, buddy!

Bye for now,

Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA



Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
The imagery in this is fantastic! Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Erin what superb imagery! This is so excellent , really speaks to the soul!Kudo's!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
You have painted this perfectly...allowing such visual detail to penetrate my understanding of this scene with ease.
Amor

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Picking up a small, dirtied rag doll, she moved to stand
in the fractured window-case, and stepped out of reality,
dreaming of the faded history
of a forgotten family.

Like walking through childhood.. beautiful Erin

Erica~

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Erin.. I got so caught up in the form and the amazing word usage I needed to go back a 2nd time for content.. always a treat! There are so many unique phrases .. such a word painting, this. When I went back, I realized that I was completely immersed in the visuals, the character.. you have written one helluva a masterpiece with this! I just got lost in it.. could feel her thoughts. love, katy xox.

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
one of your best writes; i truly enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
From this poem I can see the family who lived in this interesting house is far from forgotten.This poem took me carefully and perfectly through a memory...it was well worth it!One of the best poems I have read.


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