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Echoes

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, September 28, 2003

I took a walk into my head (bled),
starting at now (how) presented as past,
seeing (being) begotten road behind-ahead.

Tiny strings (wings) of experienced flings
had woven my trials (wiles), bridges and nets,
into a rainbow of uplifting sense (fence).

Bulbous hollows (shallows) dotted its length
where lessons not learned (unearned)
haplessly sank, lots of these (appease…please).

Elsewhere erstwhile hopes flew down (drown)
as energies collapsed in helplessness (hopelessness)
creating void (devoid) of angled rounds.

Yet, silver rivers (givers) of humanity ran
expanding roads width (gift) with acuity,
providing a base (face) to my id, comforting me.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/29/03
 


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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Very creative and original, Erin. The echo effect is great.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Very creative write Erin!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
I like the way you worked in the echo.
Intriguing.

Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Erin. Wow! I'm in awe. What a great concept and how well you have executed it. The technique reinforces the message and it is just a delight.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Erin....you are so creative....love this...floria

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
So unique and a great vision.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Creative! Bravo! Erin, I salute you!

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
A winner in my mind... very unique!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Well if you are going for creativity and uniqueness then you win! Always a great stop on the den!!!!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Erin...very very creative write!!!

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
Nicely done, Erin!

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

September 29, 2003. 03:29. EST.

Let the "Echoes" be heard, while the - copywriters - put all of their words on the historical pages of Poetry under a note: "Remember that Poet Erin E. Moen livid in the twenty-first century".

>>>>>> What makes a great Poet is not the number of pages she/he writes, but the number of people she/he can inspire. < < < < < <

“Echoes” teaches and inspires. It is a poem that enriches the Poetry pages.

Happy Healthy day, Poet Erin E. Moen.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
superb juxtapositioning... unique form...

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
This is such a great play on words :0)

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Very creative.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Extremely creative! Great write!

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Wonderful!
This really works, Erin.
It reverberates with me.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Brilliant!


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