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Hitler Murdered More Than Human Beings

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

I've changed the title, from 'killed' to 'murdered'. Killed can imply accidents, murder implies intent.

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Thursday, October 23, 2003

I’ve looked through History, pondered minds,
reviewed circumstance, reasons and madness sublimed,
tried to see some grand design, wondered
on hate and blight of soul. It’s scary,
especially in our present roles.

Atrocities recriminate, small acts insinuate
into our lives, we say the devil lies,
must we always subscribe our acts
to supernatural entities? Aren’t we
to blame?

I see tremendous energy spent, dreams
of hope oven-sent, enormity of
unlived lives, gone up in smoke,
the world would be different now,
we’ve lost so much. Doctors, dreamers,
cures and poems, children’s laughter,
ever-afters, too much pain to hold,
the dying never ends.

Families love, encircling earth, homes built
respecting space, the years of erstwhile angst
murdered a world, diverted pace of
progress, liquidated innocence
of a younger race, and stole
a distinctive destiny from our hands,
our hearts, our lands.

He’s not the only one to slaughter
our rising suns, the cycle circles
sentience, it seems a curse
lays on our earth, appropriating
sense of worth. I wonder if
we’ll survive ourselves.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/23/03


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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
Erin, what a horrific time in earths history and what a magnificent way to write about it...There is a quote, not sure who said it, but something to the effect that, unless we learn from these type of "mistakes" (for the lack of a better more powerful word) we are destined to repeat them...Not in my lifetime if I can help it, Peace always, ED & Rufus

Reviewed by Peter Oszmann
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
It gives me some hope and consolation to read this fine poem from someone who could not have experienced personally the true evil nature of Hitler or Stalin and their henchmen.

For us who experienced the horrors and survived, life could never be the same again.

I salute you and thank you for taking up the torch for Humanity, the torch that our generation will not be able to carry very much longer.

Sincere regards,

Peter Oszmann

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
I wonderful the same thing some days. Great write!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2003
I concur with everyone else. This was madness to the extreme. Ah, but Hitler wasn't and isn't the only one. Stalin comes to mind, among so many more despots in Africa and Europe. Now we have the spector of evil emerging in the middle east. Do we think for one minute that the Palestinians do not want to kill all Jews? Do we think for another minute that the radical Muslims and some not so radical, would not like to kill all Americans? Wake up world. This was a masterpiece which I'm saving.

Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
This is ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!

These verses:

must we always subscribe our acts
to supernatural entities? Aren’t we
to blame?

hit me right where it counts, in the solar plexus.

Nothing of course could be truer.

EVEN if we are made in God's image, we sully His pristine Window of the Soul every time we spit on it and on Him/Her.

Point final.

I love this.

ERIN, send me this, and I SHALL (future determinative) publish this in the Winter, 2004, issue of Poetry in Emotion, ahead of all your other poems you have sent me.

This is great poetry!

You are REALLY really really coming into your own now, kiddo!


Riccardo



Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Erin....excellent write!!!

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Very unique piece.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
God, evolution, chaos; it matters not so much the birth, it is the growth that defines a race. One race. There are more. There would not be billions of galaxies, suns and planets if there were not more sentient beings becoming... That thought gives me pause. Is there, in the Bible, any hint of 'cousins in life' who share heaven? Wouldn't it be egotistical to think we are the only Poem of a God? Perhaps we are an early version, why stop in the Milky Way? So many planets, so much time...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
A fantastic write Erin. so beautifully crafted. You're right too about Hitler and what he did. However, we were never meant to survive ourselves.We were meant to use our free will to learn of our creator and accept Him for who He is and what He created us for. This is what humanity rejects and always has and why we can't succeed.Wanting to be our own creators to do things "Our Way" finding the leap of faith too hard to take.We aren't satisfied to be co-creators , we want to dominate, take charge, and we can't!

Reviewed on October 23, 2003
These thoughts are so true, he killed more than human beings, he killed dreams, he killed memories, he killed a lot of things. He was the defintition of evil...
Ty for sharing this eye opening write
God Bless
~Michelle~


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