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Rabid Habit

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, February 17, 2004

The character of rhyming chapter
of new poet’s simple laughter
curls and spirals as I write;
my plight, to stop the rapture.

The rhyming, rhyming in my head,
it won’t cease, there’s no release; I recede
and grieve and gulp and hope some
see the spark in me and not the lackless lark,
remark you, please. Do you see?
At times the rhymes, though addled patter,
try to climb to what true matters;
seething, weaving, sieving, wreathing,
played poetics disarray displays
a sense of conscious essence
seeking, leaking, pinking, winking at the
rapid rush of rhyme obliquing.
And my meter peters fleeter than the pace
of human race misplaced by space
as I weep replete in sorrow borrowed
from the poets past tomorrow;
leaving fever levered into ball
would make me fall with no recall
as spastic plastic nature nurtures
strange derangement’s fatal flaw,
affixing glyphic kind of mind
to bottom rung that’s strung and hung
below iconic master’s faster flitting wit.
A bit like lying under thunder’s hunger
pounding, sounding; grounding
squawks of fledgling hawks failing
to walk before they fly.
Faster lasting, past all reason,
teasing seasons of despair where
surely purely written words will save me,
grave indeed the need to fetter
chains of rhyme, I could do better,
use my mental feather duster
to unclutter rabid habit. Stop the
rhyming, rhyming in my mind,
please, stop the rhyming in my head.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 2/11/04
 


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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 9, 2008
This is an amazing poem.The way you use the words to rhyme is magnificent.I enjoy reading this poem.You are a very talented writer and its always a pleasure reading your poetry

Edwin

Reviewed on February 19, 2004
kind of hits home Erin. I've been expressing to my wife in rhyme. I do it all the time. this is nutty, but it's turning me to putty. cheers G

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 18, 2004
Erin, was such a treasure to read with pleasure upon my leisure. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
Erin...Profound write!!!!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
Have you ever noticed, while talking to someone, you think maybe you just rhymed something? Or writing a letter, you start to rhyme to those you write too...? I see it all the time, like that of a witches curse, but according to the old Bewitched show, it only happens to other witches...of course I have been referred to as the warlock of weird...a wonderful fun rhyme, now you can stop, as well as Michael and all the other rhymers here...Peace thru Rhyming, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed on February 17, 2004
Erin, Rhyming words like turds and birds,
Can really drive you crazy
I see your plight like day and night
Your mind can get quite hazy.

enjoyed very much..
...Michael

Reviewed on February 17, 2004
(((erin)))

a fun write--but whew, my brain hurts now LOL the rhyming's gonna get you? i think it got you--well done! internal, external rhyming--WOW, i'd be so confuuuused LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)


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