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The Day We Were Patriots
by Toris Okotie → (All Poetry by Toris Okotie)
  
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In recognition of Independents Day, a day America was born. (A specail greetings from Africa to all Americans)


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At the 4th of liberation


Our freedom we contend


With men so brave


Their lives they lost


 


As liberty rang its bell


A war of freedom was made


“The…are coming, the…are coming”


In readiness, they 4th for their lives


 


At the rise of our flag


Free nation we’ve now become


From the north to south


East to the west remains


 


A colony, we once were


Deducted of our taxes


Deprived a right to represent


Govern by a nation so faraway


 


On this day of exclamation


Our people are made free


And as the years run by


A nation of freedom, we celebrate


 


We are the patriots


 


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 Reviews of "The Day We Were Patriots"
Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on July 8, 2003
Thanks for the poem and thanks for reminding us what was necessary to make this country what it is.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Great write!

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
A Outstanding Piece Toris in celebration of the 4th!
~Nikki~

Reviewed on July 2, 2003
(((o, toris)))

what a beautiful poem *STANDING OVATION*

thank you for writing this from africa...i pray africa and the united states will always be united and friends

GOD BLESS AMERICA AND AFRICA

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. i'm saving this one to my library to savor again and again

Reviewed on July 2, 2003
beautiful tribute to our nation, toris; this touched me to the very depths of my soul! i wish more people felt like you do about america; then there wouldn't be all this hatred and terrorist threats. sad. ((((HUGS)))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D (HUGE smiles!)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Well done. A lot of lives sacrificed to get us here and to keep us here. Thank you.

Reviewed on July 1, 2003
Excellent and so Outstanding, Loved reading this,

Reindeer


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