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IN THE DARKNESS third draft of lyrics
by Joel Sattler → (All Poetry by Joel Sattler)
Tuesday, July 30, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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IN THE DARKNESS third draft of lyrics

for the longest time
I walked a million miles around your life
had to find a way
to the point where I could simply say you're mine tonight
you're mine tonight

as far as we could go
while the world outside us spins alone
got to fly away
to a place where they could never find us

in the darkness
there we found the light
in raw imagination
in the darkness
with your body next to mine
in raw imagination

as far as we could go
we went even farther than our minds
through a month of days
I remember fire through the haze
but I get it
I gotta fight for life

through the waters
falling from the sky
you were an inspiration
and a warning
where my fingers left a sign
it was an indication
out the window
the people walking by
it was a revelation
let the storm blow
what we are here to find
is raw imagination

in the darkness
there we found the light
in raw imagination
in the darkness
with my body next to thine
in raw imagination

out the window
the people walking by
it was a revelation
let the storm blow
what we are here to find
is raw imagination

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 30, 2019
I can't recall the other two iterations. But I would title it, Raw Imagination. Also, your reference to same that she is yours (mine tonight) suggests some type of ownership the is the anti-thesis of free love.

Ron


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