Till The Edge of Day (poem) by Carmen Ruggero on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 23, 2004

Wonderfully expressed.

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

Nice composition and message. I wish every interesting and passionate woman finds a husband that isn't a hibernating bear. Franz

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2004

Bittersweet yet beautifully written. May that bed again be filled by two.

((((((hugs))))))

♫ Jackie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2004

Beautifully done, tribute to lasting love.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Carmen, this is truly beautiful! ~Z~

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Excellent. Well written. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 17, 2004

Come quickly, love, into my dreams tonight,
and lay beside me on this marriage bed.
Don�t hedge what�s true , pondering on what might,
or might not have been. You and I are wed.

That, we are, till death should our names bellow.
A promise I�ve made, and it, I shall keep
till the edge of day, marks the night in yellow
sundown, and sharply, the sky�s a dark, deep,

abyss; my sight�s hollow, my voice silent.
Because I�ve promised to love only one,
though by your choice, not mine, you are absent,
you�ll be in my heart, till my dreams are done.

Come lay beside me on this marriage bed,
don�t you steal away, you and I are wed.

Carmen...one of ure very best sonnet....excellent!!!!!

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

Beautiful write, really enjoyed reading...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 16, 2004

This is such a marvelous Sonnet Carmen!
deeply felt and rich in expression...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Beautiful Write Carmen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

A beautiful sonne, Carmen. Thank you for sharing this creative offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

a beautifully penned poem, Carmen ... unfortunately, commitment is sometimes one-sided ...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

This was wonderful, I loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

A gorgeous sonnet Carmen...
lovely flow and love the ending
couplet...floria

Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader)

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Carmen;

I can only read this with a male's perspective but I see absolute commitment versus conditional love. Some lovely lines here, especially ". . . the edge of day marks the night in yellow sundown. . ."

Dan S.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Carmen, one can feel your longing in your words. A very touching write from your heart. Lisa