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Metaphors in Black and White (Justin's challenge)
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Metaphors in Black and White


 


Encircled by darkness, deep in contemplation,
and images begin to waltz their dance of wonder
moving inspiration through my mind.


 


I saw something once, it wasn’t clear then,
but I hold in my hand this negative impression
of someone I remembered smiling at me.


 


In a flash of slight illumination, a negative
is reversed when light transcends dark
and then, the metaphor is clear.


 


I saw something, it’s unmistakable -- I know,
and I hold in my hand this positive allusion
my capricious wishes had reversed.


 


That someone hadn’t smiled at me.
In the dark to light reversal, I can plainly see:
I’d taken a picture of you, slightly out of focus.


 


Carmen Ruggero .2003


 


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 Reviews of "Metaphors in Black and White (Justin's challenge)"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2003
Carmen,

Met in a flash excellent poetry.
This intake on the dark and light.
"In a flash of slight illumination, a negative
is reversed when light transcends dark
and then, the metaphor is clear.







I saw something, it’s unmistakable -- I know,
and I hold in my hand this positive allusion
my capricious wishes had reversed.

Peggy




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 18, 2003
Very well written Carmen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michael Curry
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Whoa! Subtle... but it hits me right between the eyes with a solid womp... and a muffled, deep echo! Nicely done!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
You direct your orchestra of words like a maestro in this one once again, Carmen. Well done! Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
our goal should always be clarity... very well written!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Profound write!

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
OUTSTANDING response, Carmen..I am Impressed by your approach to this...BRILLIANT introspective write...IT IS ACTUALLY spirit of research and ANYTHING RELATED! And your spirit to look through comes forth SPLENDIDLY..C'est magnifique!

Justin

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Carem,
This is so awesome.
"I saw something, it’s unmistakable -- I know,
and I hold in my hand this positive allusion
my capricious wishes had reversed.







That someone hadn’t smiled at me.
In the dark to light reversal, I can plainly see:
I’d taken a picture of you, slightly out of focus."

Taylor



Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Splendid! Great and powerful lines.

Reviewed on November 17, 2003
This was outstanding, beautiful, just beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Carmen! You staggered me with this one! What a brilliant gem this is! Kudo's my friend! I think the flu is on the run;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 17, 2003
Wow, Carmen. Another mind blowing entry in this challenge. Loved this!


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