I see him in the shop windows as I pass:
A jolly sort, round tummy; hair, what’s left,
cropped short, and mainly grey
beard almost half white.
He could play, has played, Santa,
He moves a little slow and his hand shakes
a tiny bit. His sea grey eyes, still sea bright
need help --- just a little – to see.
His face is tanned, and lightly weathered..
Sometimes he looks like my father
And sometimes he looks like me.
But he is not me, not really me,
Oh, I am grey, and shaky and fat, old
But not where it counts. Where it counts
I hunger to learn, to live to love. I am alive
More so than ever, alive to dreams a young
Man wouldn’t dare. Am I old?
I think not!!!
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my manifesto, my line in the sand
I am older but arguably not much wiser, and like you, in my heart still nineteen. Too bad the body is my enemy. Only in dreams are we still the picture of our youth. Good imagery, John.
HAHAHA....funny the spitting image of my enemy...age....LOL..I hunger to learn, to live to love. I am alive
More so than ever, alive to dreams a young
Man wouldn’t dare. Am I old? AM I!!!
NEVER
Love Tinka
Reviewed by e
Reviewed on January 4, 2003
So enjoy it. Every season has an age, every age a season. Enjoy. Life isn't difficult, just people.
~E
Thank you for your good reviews of my work. I like yours! May God bless you and may you continue to grow yonger at heart with each passing day. The Bible says that we are to become as children. You're definately on the right track!
Reviewed by Julie Gaskins (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2003
I believe that age is a matter of the heart and in this thought provoking write you make it clear that we all have the ". . .hunger to learn, to live to love." This desire exist whether you are 9 or 99.
Excellent write!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2003
Yeah age "IS" just a number. Great write most coolest one. Ty, Dani ;)
Bravo!! The thirst for knowledge is the greatest gift we have, up until that last moment, the wall to more knowledge will be breached, and then...what? Exciting thoughts, wondrous human life, treasured and measured, I will miss it.
May you find some quenching of your thirst in this new New Year, John! May we all find such.
Erin
:)
Reviewed by Nicole Enno (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2002
This was just great!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2002
Certainly enjoyed this--and agree with Sherry and Connie about age...
Happy New Year to a 'young at heart' poet...
Reviewed by William M. Sowman
Reviewed on December 31, 2002
I sure can't offer advice John. I see the same guy when I pass a reflection. Bill Murray Happy New Year
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2002
Age is simply Mind over Matter...if you don't mind, it doesn't matter! :)
Good write, John.
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
More so than ever, alive to dreams a young
Man wouldn’t dare. Am I old? AM I!!!
NEVER
Love Tinka
~E
This...
"Where it counts
I hunger to learn, to live to love. I am alive
More so than ever, alive to dreams a young
Man wouldn’t dare."
That is the KEY to life! Very good write!
Hugs,
Maria
Excellent write!
happy 2003, John, Sir!!!
michele
May you find some quenching of your thirst in this new New Year, John! May we all find such.
Erin
:)
Happy New Year to a 'young at heart' poet...
Good write, John.