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Poet and Red Mule--II
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these two clowns showed up in my haiku project-- parts of their saga has already been posted as stand alone ku

raise your hand if you know what a hi-grader is.

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theme in 9 haiku

Poet, foolish one,
Sees what the wise will not see
Shouts to the world “LOOK”

Poet rides Red Mule
down hill and up, chasing fox
with a hound of no sense

The red mule bucks, kicks,
Throws poet into the mud:
Poet gets back on.

Poet bears Red Mule
Piggyback mule comes to town
Silly mule

Poet and Red Mule,
Beasts of burden, Stablemates
Two of a kind

Along the ridge top
Poet canters Red Mule
folly and nonsense

Red Mule–
passion colored equine
poet’s muddy helper

Poet, foolish one,
Wise Red Mule, earthy equine,
perfect pair . . .

Poet and Red Mule,
in the mines of memory:
high-graders!

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 Reviews of "Poet and Red Mule--II"
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
Uncanny!! Red Mule, don't knock 'im off.
His groupies'll killya. {Started to say fans, but...groupie is funny? Can't say I didn't try.] Pea the Empress of Pod

Reviewed on March 16, 2003
great work..very clever and won chuckles...laughter, not the clown!
hugs
krissy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
Hahaha. Whoever invented haiku is smiling.
~E

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
John I am with Sandie on this one and big time this was excellent.
peg

Reviewed on March 16, 2003
A kick-ass poem. Great lines John!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on March 16, 2003
These were great! Just love these haiku's! Must confess though..don't know what a high-grader is either...

Reindeer

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
Hand is not rising. What is a high-grader? fun Haiku write :-) with wisdom. Good Write.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
Very impressed!! You took this to the limit. Loved reading!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 16, 2003
The red mule bucks, kicks,
Throws poet into the mud:
Poet gets back on.
Poet and Red Mule,
in the mines of memory:
high-graders!
Won an accolade on this one
well done
Love
tinka


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