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Goodnight Till The Morning Sun
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"Goodnight Till The Morning Sun" *by Tinka Boukes & Robert L. Sheridan* Walking *Walking upon white sands* Imprisoned by thoughts and narrow walls That holds no comfort within right now *Walking* *Walking beneath the sun* *Yes warm* *But feel embraced by the coldness* *As hands touch loneliness* *Down on hands and knees I go* *To touch the warmth once more* *But through clouds of smoke* *I search for you* *And the sun* *Oh hear my voice upon the ocean* *Within your dreams* *Till the morning sun appears* *And as sunshine warm your face* *Open your eyes in joy* *And know my thoughts are with you* *But for now I am walking* *Walking upon white sands* *Imprisoned by narrow walls* *And thoughts* *That holds no comfort* *But as I walk beneath the sun* *Upon white sands within a dream* *My heart belongs� to you* *As I say goodnight* *Till the morning sun* *Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes & Robert L. Sheridan*

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Blissful! Thank you...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Beautiful art and words~`*

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 16, 2005

This is so moving in so many emotional ways. Beautiful!
Tracey
The music is wonderful. like it.

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Ultra romantic with touches of despair. Very nice!

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Beautiful collab... you can feel the pain, loneliness, and uncertainity of a future, not yet dream of...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

This Even Better Than!

TRASK

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Great job you two!

Reviewed by George Jackson

This is such a great poem in so many ways. Excellent team work, excellent write!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

wow, lance and tinks, you make quite a team! well done! bravo!! brava!! *STANDING O!*

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Just read the other one and now this. Great day for reading! This is a gem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Tinka ,Robert, this is superb! You did beautifully
together a seamless gem! I look forward to more!;-)

etw

Reviewed by Dale Clark

As Robert said excellent collab.

Reviewed by jude forese

excellent collab!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Geez, it seems all you do over there in Africa is sleep, when do you get your work done...LOL!? Ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Excellent collab' Tinks. Never give up...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

Superlative work my friend - and a great honor working with you!!

Always the best,

Robert

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

This is very lovely and I like the way you two handled this one. The music is fine but the poem better.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Sounds like all that searching hasn't paid off, but hop[e springs eternal. It must be the music that thwarts the search for love. Actually I am being my usual asinine self, actually it was a lovely poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

A powerfully sad piece, but a wonderful collaboration, Tinka and Robert.

Walking

Imprisoned by thoughts and narrow walls

That holds no comfort within right now