It's 5 o' Clock (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Great write, Tinka! My antidote to a mood like this one is to indulge myself in things that make me happy, or throw shoes at the wall...whatever suits my fancy at the moment

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Tinka,

Beautiful picture ... stunningly graphic poem - exceptional write my friend!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

No wonder you are moody Tink if you get up at 5 a.m. That's obscene!
I think we all have visions of childhood like this one, but you capture the emotions well.
best
Ian

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

It's true.....we all have such days...

A great write tink.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Tonka...I know you are moody...HUGS....another wonderful write from you my dear friend...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 24, 2005

Sometimes moody days are good retreats from the frantic world. Your's sounds almost delightful. Next time invite me and I'll join you.

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Gonna have to tape the voice in her heart shut, on those moody days, hehehe.

Take care moody toody

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

This to shall pass, Tinka, just as soon as the sun shines!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

We all have days like that...splendid write Tinka

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

You know I get the same feeling around that time. Great write Tinka.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Writing usually is the catalyst that alters my moods.

5:00, where I live, is the gloaming and I'm always affected during that time of day. The shadows lengthen, it's the time between worlds.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

good one

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

C'mon find me a woman who doesn't have moods and I'll show you a duck that won't swim..

But yup the SA rain is enough to make anyone feel down, when it lets SA win the cricket...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

It's wisdom that let's us recognize it's only a passing mood. Enjoyed the write, girlfriend. :-)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Moody is ok as long as you get rid of the bad ones. ;)

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Seems you pen great while under the influence of a mood LOL

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Without our moods, things would be pretty blaaaahhhhh....

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Moods are good for us, it would be dull without them!;-)
Good one Tinks!

Love, eileen

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Oh well, we all have our moods...
Always beautys from you Tinka..
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

Very nice poem, Tinka =0).

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

A little dark poem to start your day, but it is well done. Captures the mood so well.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

this is moody but beautiful...as are you tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

glad you are okay; i worry about you, tinks...still, a powerful and emotive write, as only you can do; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :(

thanks for your review on my story about ronee' le-anne reaux; much appreciated, sis! :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2005

BOO!!!!! Come on, snap out of it. Still, moody or not, you wove a nice poem. Sometimes our best work comes from despair, and glum and misery and all that jazz!

Melancholy mocking her

Wet blades of grass