Moon Dance Illusion” (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

super duper Tink, enjoyed the peppy music and all. G

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Great pen Tinka. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

Private thoughts, beautiful image.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Deeply moving write, Tinka. Much enjoyed!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

A lovely romantic write Tinka...
Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

truly beautiful poetry, Tinka ...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Sara made me curious so had to search for this song she was talking about...here it is to share with you aswell!!
Love Tinka
Moon Dance
~ Van Morrison

Well it's a marvelous night for a moondance
With the stars up above in your eyes
A fantabulous night to make romance
'Neath the cover of October skies
And all the leaves on the trees are falling
To the sound of the breezes that blow
And I'm trying to please to the calling
Of your heart-strings that play soft and low
You know the night's magic
Seems to whisper and hush
And all the soft moonlight
Seems to shine in your blush...

Can I just have one a' more moondance with you, my love?
Can I just make some more romance with a' you, my love?

Well I wanna make love to you tonight
I can't wait till the morning has come
And I know now the time is just right
And straight into my arms you will run
And when you come my heart will be waiting
To make sure that you're never alone
There and then all my dreams will come true dear
There and then I will make you my own
And every time I touch you, you just tremble inside
And I know how much you want me that, you can't hide...

Can I just have one more moondance with you, my love?
Can I just make some more romance with you, my love?

Well it's a marvelous night for a moondance
With the stars up above in your eyes
A fantabulous night to make romance
'Neath the cover of October skies
And all the leaves on the trees are falling
To the sound of the breezes that blow
And I'm trying to please to the calling
Of your heart-strings that play soft and low
You know the night's magic
Seems to whisper and hush
And all the soft moonlight
Seems to shine in your blush...

One more moondance with you
In the moonlight
On a magic night
la, la, la, la, there's a moonlight
On a magic night
Can't I just have one more dance
With you my love?

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Sadly beautiful. How do you do it, Tinka? Paint a myriad of emotions in one poem?

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

This reminds me a lot of the Van Morrison song, "Moondance". Still a beautiful poem. ~ Sara

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

mmm...very nice...to which I can only reply...."come, let's dance on golden sands still warm from the touch of the sun and I will whisper to you of treasures, long hidden from the eyes of man"
Grand write, Tinka!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Your Moon Dance is very lovely, Tinka - Dance On!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Times when ones mind floats away. Enjoying, even feeling one with creation.
Nothing better than star gazing, to calm the mind...Have you seen the moon through a telescope?

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Tinka,

Mesmerizing, beautiful dance of words--thank you

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Henry Stevens

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Lovely poem. Henry

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

A gentle exaltation of layered midnight rapture. Reading this with the music provided one kind of pleasure and reading without the music, for me, an even deeper kind:-)A truly beautiful "illusion."

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Tinka,

Your exquisite poems always dance the "Moon Dance" - heavingly and romantic ... superb my friend!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

nothing less then lovely is your poetry
excellent write .... Tinka

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Beautiful poem Tinka, love the images!

etw

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

this is so pretty, tinks; very nice job! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D