Please Exit My Mind (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

So very precious Bill!!Thank you for the treausure!!

Eternal Love, Dove

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on September 3, 2006

This is truly one of the most beautiful poems I have found today expressing love on this den. Wonderful work.....

Reviewed on September 2, 2006

Out of sight, out of mind............or, out of mind....out of sight?

You choose, D'Artagnan!

I believe you love your wife very much, and this is just intricate and clever weaving, William....well done!

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 2, 2006

You describe a universal human dilemma, William; and it can be most tormenting. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 2, 2006

Its a good thing it was only your foot that was wounded. Because your pen is smokin on this one.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on September 2, 2006

You hit this one right on the thingy called head!!

Well penned!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on September 2, 2006

What inner torment - you describe so perfectly the difficulties unrequited love can bring. Great composition. Panda :)

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

Perhaps all too often true -- very well expressed. R

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

hmmmm I think it is time to be honest with the one you are with, she deserves to know that she is not the one who holds your heart. The occasional fantasy of someone else is probably not a bad thing, but if it is a consistant situation, perhaps you should rethink your current position? Beautiful poem of longing and desire.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

A very compelling piece, William, inticing thoughts of 'other-whens' of reality combined with parallel 'now-when' yearnings many entertain in their minds. Your title drew me in, your words ... caught me off guard.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

Just for goodness sakes...you know the secrets I've dreamed many times over and over with my dead marriage. I soon learned what I was lacking was the strength to change the whole scenario and learn to live and continue my search. I'm still searching.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

a most agonizing state of mind ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

Sweet and romantic! Many people fall into this state of mind. This speaks for many.

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

what sweet agony........my goodness

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

Oh how frustrating to have that happen.We humans are so complex!;-)_
Excellent poem, William!

Love,
Eileen