Where Pain Reside (A Collaboration) (poem) by William Bonilla on AuthorsDen

Where Pain Reside (A Collaboration)
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
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Where Pain resides (A collaboration) *~~** William ~~ From a thousand miles away My heart breaks My soul you imprison In your every thoughts My whispers you no longer hear Fear has taken residence Within every wonderful thought Of you Wondering if I’ll ever embrace you Within the warmth of my arms. ~~ The beauty of your lovely eyes I crave to see, my reflection upon Your sweet breath I desire To inhale as our lips meet In dreams only dreamed by the Gods Can the heavens ever explain Or relate to you These feelings that are forbidden But to you For I can no longer endure Such punishment As the hand I’ve been dealt In this cruel world Where the pain of true love rules And it resides in my broken heart. ~~ Amber ~~ I live each day alone longing to be with you Shattered at the thought that may never happen Brings loneliness of the deepest kind.. My days are filled with longing Needing your tender touch Craving your luscious lips That holds the honey to my existence. Every waking day Sends thoughts of lost lover’s chance To have the happiness That we both deserve. Some long ago curse Has set us apart Wallowing in the painful Realizations that we will never Quench our deepest desires for each other. You live your life as a prisoner to your desires, Sending energy to my soul That wills me to feel your pain It hurts just as deeply as my own. Fly on Mercury’s stallion Make the journey to defy destiny And consummate this passionate love That only we can share I beg of you to not delay! By: William Bonilla & Amber "V" Moonstone 03/09/09

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 16, 2009

AWESOME Twosome! Collab!
Such undying Loves passion frothing and bubbling at the edge!
Both your verses intertwine magically and romantically William and Amber! ((Viv))
Much read between the lines, let the consummation begin!
As words explore TWO WANTING Souls!

WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light and WARM HUGS, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

So romantic, you two do surely know how encouragment to each other counts in your lives and others like to read about you two and share in your life too.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

Your two voices mix beautifully in this poem. There's a strong feeling of longing that stretches across time. Fantastic writing:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

This is a great collaboration from two talented and gifted writers.I enjoy reading this romantic poem,Great job you 2,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Romantically sweet words...from two AD authors that ROCK!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

As usual an absolutely wonderful write between two of our finest. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Love is the most exquisite pain known to mankind. Distance is a matter of mind. Miles cannot diminish the longings nor can it ignore them. Consummation is the only cure, but with it comes the curse of memories that make being a foot apart seem like half a world.

Well written.

Bobbi

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 1, 2009

Two lovers yearning for fruition setting the page ablaze with your passion! You two really can burn up the night!;-)Superb collab!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

William, Thank you once again for the honor of collaborating with you. It is always a pleasure and a unique experience. I believe this one really shines as truly a magnificent piece of emotionally charged literature! Two kindred souls unite once again!
I wish you peace, light and love, and hugs,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Morning Star

First of all William this poem is beautiful
So much emotions and pain and love
But trough this perfect chosen words of the first part
The feelings and love felt it�s true
But afraid of change
And in the second part she is hopeful and willing
To wait till his heart it�s ready to face that
He can�t go on this way and must let his heart
Make the choice,
A beautiful love story and collaboration
A stunning look of heart torn between two loves
Sending you Peace Love and Light�..Yolie

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 31, 2009

super collab William, smooth and tender, cheers

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

A great read that I enjoyed reading hugs Johanna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Your hearts speak what they feel...much love and pain mixed in this awesome collaboration!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Breathtakingly Beautiful. Such poignant heart felt writing in this collaboration of two unique souls finding common universe and ground! WOW............M

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

This poem is filled with beauty and poignant thoughts, a heart tugging write you two...excellent William and Amber
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

He said, she said, beautifully - well done, William and Amber.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Two sides of a coin here and like a coin many similarities but also some distinct differences. In the first have you can feel the want and desire but also the acceptance of what must be, in the second part you also feel the want and desire but instead of acceptance a hope that he will change his mind and find a way. Interesting collaboration...well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Very beautiful William and Amber.
Such sweet sorrow.

Blessings
((( SEMPER FI )))

Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

What a beautiful love story to one another. Perhaps like Robert Browing and Emily Dickinson. Interesting write the way one person expresses their feeling while the other follows.

Mary

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Like Tell's arrow and the apple, the poem come together if one hits the other, the arrow flies because the presence of the apple, the apple is there because the arrow. The last momentum...when they are together sharing the pain.
Great collaboration, don't ask me who's the arrow.

Georg

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Oh my,very well written as always great job to both of you..have a wonderful and safe day ...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Powerful write, William and Amber; bravo! Brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Oh such pain I'm so familiar with! You've both put it in verse so eloquently it seems you used tears for ink! Excellent write!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva