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Embraced (Haiku)
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Youth of a nation
Embraced in battle's death grip
Lose their innocence.

By: William Bonilla
3/29/03

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Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Yes william,
Innocence, ofte never to be redeemed again in this lifetime...I salute you words scattered in scarcity, yet standing tall and speaking volumes!
Sincere thanks,
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Life and death in three lines. Great write, William.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
This is a solidly packed haiku...well done my friend.

Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
William, I know you are right and they lose it the first day in combat. Bill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
very effective!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Love it.

Embarced ? Embraced ?

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
you captured this in such a powerful way William, excellent haiku!deeply moving...

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
How horribly true, William...sadly. Great haiku! :)

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
I welcome simplicity on this subject. Great haiku.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Wow William...I always say..haiku is more than just counting lines and syllables..it is difficult to pull off a good one...this is excellent..Floria

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Hey William, This was excellent.Haiku is so difficult to do, and you packed it in to make it understandable.
Great Job!!!


yf
tony

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Great message

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Wonderful haiku which says so much.
Chrissie

Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Wonderful haiku and message. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
ah thoughts
excellent ideas
excellent work
beautiful haiku

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
yes yes yes.....and for what!!!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
yup tis true
josie

Reviewed on March 30, 2003
Excellent haiku!

Reindeer


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