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Once Upon a Fairy Tale
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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Fun poetry gives me a lot of smiles in my insides. I like writing and playing with words sometimes. This was written after I watched Camelot on the television. It must have been hot and a world of confusion when it came to satisfying lust.

I'll take passion anytime my friends. I'm lucky to have that in my life now.

This is a repost.

Susan


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By Susan K. Rowse
copyright 2004

Once upon a Fairy Tale when maidens with long hair
Let it down for valor's fool who didn't really care
For what his friends would dare to think or even less to prove
As mindless notions quickly came as boldly he'd persue
The maiden with the moonlit eyes and stars made for this rube
With limpid glands that spoke in tights from every tuck and groove
She'd purr to him in moments while his fingers, scarred and bent
Grasped the edge of sanity while his passions proudly spent
Themselves upon the ivyed walls as per custom for the male
To leave a trail of silver prints... liken to the snail
Footprints of a love made quick and gushed upon the bricks
For mindless lust for fools who dared and maidens with their tricks
To woo the suitor's hand with wiles that caused so much dismay
With love that spent itself up high with lust just for a day
Gone as she mocked his play and turned his smile to tears
Back in the days of valor with laughter from these dear
Women of the Roundtable ... their Camelots of Haste
And playing men in those days when love was gone to waste
When men were fooled into this game...when passion laughed and felt
The playful tease of those that wore
a rusted chastity belt.


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 Reviews of "Once Upon a Fairy Tale"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 2, 2004
:-)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 4, 2004
Ah yes, the trusty chastity belt! I think you caught the mood of Camelot perfectly. It was all passion and lust, I trust, gone to rust.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2004
This was very good.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Most excellent Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Susan...this is spectacular!
Watch more of those movies....hee hee...
not that your other poems aren't equally good.

I enjoyed this one, and agree with your philosophy, too!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Susan this is outstanding! Kudo's!
Love your droll humour in this one

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
i love it Susan.....

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Thou art good.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Times don't change.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Ah, such grand old Romantic Love - men in tights, dresses that had to be lashed up tightly by 27 servants, and rusted chastity belts. It couldn't get any better than that!

Reviewed on July 1, 2004
Men was never wooed into the game. They wooed women into the games. This was written in reverse. I'm sorry I have to disagree with you.

So many ladies here in the den are hurt already.

~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel ~


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