The splendor of a moment worn slightly on the lips
The satisfied reflection of a passion slowly sipped
Either in a memory or filtered through a dream
Or a quiet conversation not meaning anything
But silently reflected worth... Oh! So much more
That grows with every thought process to permeate your pores
It's crazy how a moment can bring the treasures here
When you least expect the passion emerges from somewhere
Not much to begin with...this crazy trip for two
But since my thoughts have fermented
The more I dream of you.
BRILLIANT!!!! You have captured the mood, flavour and sentiment WONDERFULLY of all that that movie means to my precious memories, for a start... and THAT's no mean feat in itself! But, apart from that, the whizz-bang and smoooth subtlety combined of your richly roasted lines are classy, classic and timelessly true. This one is stirred, shaken and the whole gorgeously delicious kabush to my poetic palette, Susan. Poetic MaitreD Supreme! LOL K xx
Crazy beginnings, but wonderful endings in verse...you have the gift of great passion in your words, Susan! It is truly an honor to read your gifts; thank you!
Haunting and reflective of your romantic spirit as yes the belief in love at first sight or love garnered from a casual conversation that lingers on the mind. This poem has the reader looking back at situations and sparks of love from the past and this is a good thing.
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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write. Pierre
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
A satisfactory conclusion to a romantic interlude..
Grace Kelly was a cool actress, but I much preferred Hedy Lamar or Sophia Loren..
Shalom
Peter
enjoy your romantic postings
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
The more I dream of you. <----------Blimey 10/10 for a great shagging points...
The poem does have a deep theatrical feel to it. Splendid..
Hugs,
Fee
Xxx dove