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Falling Into Hell
by TONY MIKE NERONE → (All Poetry by TONY MIKE NERONE)
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My world shook literally as the ground around me opened

An earthquake was in progress

My anxiety rose to a feverous pitch

As the ground opened under me

I fell ten feet into a cavity of rock

My leg hurt very much I believed it to be broken

My covering closed immediately

I heard some moaning and then someone sobbing

It was so dark after being buried

But I crawled in pain to the crying sounds

It was Mercedes the young girl who was one of my neighbors

I reached her and asked her if she was okay

She choked back her sobs but said she was unhurt

I told her of my pain in my left leg

She felt my leg with her hands so cold

The coolness actually felt good on my leg

I tried to calm her because the young girl was very scared

A voice came out of nowhere for me to hear

Dig your way with your hands upward

The voice sounded vaguely familiar

And I followed the voice as it instructed me and Mercedes

I dug my way upward causing my hands to bleed

Mercedes dug also causing her hands to bleed

We must have been at digging upwards a good two hours

The voice was now silent

The brightness of ash began to burn our eyes

As we reached the earth's surface

We were alive and grateful

But outside of the hole we just dug, the ground was not damaged

Our homes were still standing in one solid structure

I do not no what happened that day

But Mercedes and myself felt relieved

No one else felt anything that day in our area

However we know that there is an angel at the core of Earth 
Because he rescued us from the depth of hell

 

 

Tony Mike Nerone

4-16-10




 

 


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 Reviews of "Falling Into Hell"
Reviewed by Ruth Gonzales (Reader)
Reviewed on April 17, 2010
Great story from beginning to end. Very captivating.
There is so much to life we cannot explain whether in our own beings or all around. That in which we trut. Faith...To dwell always in us. Healing comes from the faith and the faith comes from within. Blessings...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 17, 2010
You had me from the first line! Great story telling...Keep those angels close, we all need a good angel on our side..
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Simple Sounds (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
There have been many times in my life, that my survival could not be explained by a human mind...it gives one an inner peace.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Thank you for sharing this experience, Tony. I, for one, do not know where I'd be today if I'd not been rescued by angels time and time again. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Tense moments and eventful build-up to a poignant ending. Nicely written.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Blimey mate, this holds ones attention on every word.
An amazing write with very vivid descriptions.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Captivating with a whole lot of food for thought.
I do love a Happy Ending to an otherwise Horrendous Day!!!

Thank you for sharing!! Warmth and Love to you, Carin' Spirit

Reviewed on April 16, 2010
A captivating story, Tony! It held my attention from beginning to end. Love this!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
INTERESTING...YOUR IMAGERY IS CERTAINLY VIVID. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS TO YOU. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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