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When You Quit Drinking
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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I drank for years,
used alcohol to help
soak up my insecurities,
problems and fears.
Quit 20 years ago today,
no more alcohol
coming my way.
Drinking did help
with boredom,
also cause you to
lose your freedom.


With alcohol there never was
a dull moment around.
Needed support,
there always was the ground.
Ducking and dodging the police,
killed quite a bit of time.
They arrest you then
charge you with a crime.


When you quit drinking,
the mind does
more clear thinking.
Thinking about filling the gap,
when boredom comes to zap.
Better find a good
substitute quick,
or boredom will
put you in a trick.


Writing helps!


G


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 Reviews of "When You Quit Drinking"
Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on April 3, 2005
Congratulations... writing does help as does other simple joys... but, this alcoholic, truly loves the time that others would consider "boring." From the helter-skelter life of drugs and booze, boredom is kind of peaceful...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
To substitute alcohol with writing is a very wise thing indeed, Grady. The genie in the bottle is always trying to get me to let him out. Congratulations on 20 years of freedom. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Mega Congratulations, from your death row sentence.
It kills time forever.
I've always admired America for its atempt at prohabition..
I read 80% of murders in the states are drink/drug related..

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Congratulations on the 20 years of sobriety, Grady. For those who are addicted to alcohol, every day of sobriety is an epic achievement. I am glad that you have found other ways to spend your time. I am certain it has afforded you the ability to better appreciate your life and your family.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on April 1, 2005
allRIGHT, grady! 20 years of sobriety! AWESOME; may you have 20 more years and even beyond that! CONGRATZ!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Congratz on 20 years Grady!!

Great write my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Nice one, I admire your tanacity...more power to your pen.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
i could have written this as far as it being the truth for me too. it has been 15 years for me and in the beginning i thought nothing would be interesting without rum to flavor it but life surprised me. i do get bored and restless still at times but writing has filled much of the gap for me. you are a wonderful poet grady

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
I echo Ed, Congrats on being an example of how to take control of your life. Be proud Grady,if you accomplish nothing else, what you did is powerful and inspiring!Giving up any addiction is a victory!
Excellent poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 1, 2005
Congrats on your 20 Year Anniversary, Grady. And writing does help all of us - Write On!


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