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Punishment Enough
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
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Living here on earth is punish enough. Just a few spiritual thoughts, take it serious or don't


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God is a loving Lord,
In my brain he doesn't punish.
There's no way a loving God
would put us on this earth
and punish us any other way.
It would be cruel and unusual punishment.
This place can be hell or worse.
And we'll catch hell
down here sooner or later.
Or we'll catch heaven.


Of course heaven
would be asking too much,
especially if we're not taking advantage
of the blessings here on earth.
How could anyone appreciate heaven
when they don't take advantage of
the good God gave us here on earth.


Living here on earth as humans,
is punishment enough.


In my brain again,
God can prevent and bless us here,
and he does.
He don't have to punish us
after we're born,
life and the devil is active right here
to give us hell on earth depending.


The good and the bad,


we have to learn to live with
the good and bad,
happy and the sad.
God equiped us with a brain to chose.
God is good,
the devil is bad.
Take your choice while you can.


We can chose love and happiness,
or hate and crappiness.
The smiling and laughing feature,
can be used anytime.
We can feel as good as we got
the nerve and courage to produce.


God, love, joy and fun,
make this earth a living heaven.


The devil, hate and meaness,
makes this earth a living hell.


A wise brain will pick the best choice
then ride on in on the horse.


We don't have to be rocket scientist
to figure the math
or chose the right path.


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 Reviews of "Punishment Enough"
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
I choose Love, God, and Heaven... I heard a Great teacher once say To a Christian a person that loves God this is the worst Hell we will ever live. To a sinner lost of God this is the only heaven they will ever know. Your poem reminded me of that teacher and his thoughts. Expressed Well "ONE POET"

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
I simply loved this one! God Bless, love Holly

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Ditto Kimmy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
Written with true...opened eyes and to the point! "We can choose love and happiness or hate and crappiness..." My favorite line, and I will probably use it on my kids! Thanks for sharing!

Love and Peace~

Kimmy~


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 5, 2006
It's all in the choices we make with the free will God gave us. God permits tragedy and hardships He doesn't cause them.

Reviewed on November 5, 2006
There is always to the good fighting the evil, the saint fighting the devil, within each one of us, we mustn't give in to the devils and the evils.

Good write, Grady!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)


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