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Don't Be So Mean!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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(Yes, I'm talking to myself, you and whoever might be reading this!)

Lighten up and quit being so mean

Make an adjustment and come clean

I'm talking to myself and everyone else out there reading this write

Lighten up on yourself because it is worth the fight

I quit letting my dark side run the show

Where that fool was trying to take me I didn't want to go

This was some years ago and my life is much happier, now I can cruise

I share this with you because I have nothing to loose

Sure I'm still tough and firm

But I'm no longer that mean old germ

Sure I'm proud to say and I will brag on this positive move I made

It wasn't easy and the dues I have definitely paid

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 Reviews of "Don't Be So Mean!"
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on February 28, 2003
Very good and I did come clean, just today. :) Thanks.

JC

Reviewed on February 28, 2003
This poem seems to jump right out of the blues when reading the others about the dragon slayer, I guess you're like most of us, just write what you think at the time.

Good emotional display Grady!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2003
Ha ha ha ha! This is funny but serious at the same time. Love that angle!..Like how it kind of simply falls together. Teresa

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on February 25, 2003
Very good !

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 15, 2003
I like you are my worst critic.
If there's something negative about me I admit it.
But on the whole, I stay in the light.
Even though I work in the middle of the night.
So, I accept your gauntlet tossed.
As long as you hang on so I don't get lost.

Reviewed on February 15, 2003
liked this grady! btw, i live in burleson, texas, which is just south of fort worth. burleson is 12 miles south of downtown fort worth! burleson is in northern johnson county, texas. now you know! btw, i also love alabama's music; it's too bad they are not going to be around much longer; they were the only band in country music (besides the statlers) who i liked! they were terrific in concert! (i've seen 'em once in concert! but my favorite performer of all in country music is none other than the great loretta lynn! i have seen her six times in concert, and i am fixin' to see her for my 7th time on march 8, 2003; can't wait! :) and i have had the pleasure of meeting loretta lynn in person; she is as gracious as she seems! she is among the nicest people i have ever met!) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on February 15, 2003
I couldn't have written this any better myself. Thanks Grady!
Jill :)

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2003
Enjoyed :) J & J

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on February 15, 2003
Well said Grady!
Chrissie


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