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Borrowed Time
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living on it
should have been dead before it
six foot under
ears dead to thunder
eyes dark to light
no future in sight
no more sorrow
not even a tomorrow
buried in the dirt
no more hurt


what don't kill you
strengthens to renew
joy with a dead smile
borrowed from the grim reapers pile
fools chasing to recoup
has me dead in his scope


i duck
i dodge
hide in my garage
he flew on past me
not knowing he missed me
he backed up to find me
tired of running
my sudden appearence
was stunning


i looked him right in the eye
he screamed
"you ready to die!"
i told him to take me
but instead he forsake me
took off like a bat out hell
then tripped and fell


i turned to see what frightened him
my guardian angel stunned him
surprised me too
then away she flew.


G


 


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 Reviews of "Borrowed Time"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 20, 2003
Powerful and deep Grady!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Awesome Grady
"i looked him right in the eye
he screamed
"you ready to die!"
i told him to take me
but instead he forsake me
took off like a bat out hell
then tripped and fell



i turned to see what frightened him
my guardian angel stunned him
surprised me too
then away she flew."

Peg


Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Excellent write....deep and powerful....BHUWAN

Reviewed on December 19, 2003
(((grady)))

we often entertain angels unawares (i've seen a guardian angel, too--surprise isn't the WORD i have for the encounter).

love this poem--wise, and profound

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 19, 2003
Bravo, my friend!! You have a special
guardian angel looking after you. We need
you HERE at the den making us smile and
laugh! :)

Yf, *Linda*


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