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BreakingHabits
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper → (All Poetry by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper)
  
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Some habits,
have us hopping like rabbits.
Formed as a child,
they stick to us for awhile.
Then some never leave,
in the mind they do decieve.
Overcoming might not occur,
so on we all endure.


Good habits,
are worth the hop like rabbits.
They give us strength,
to make it the length.
Bad habits,
forget the hop like rabbits.
These will ride us,
then jump on our bus.
Follow us in the house,
then hide like a mouse.


They will follow us out,
then affect us as we move about.
Sometimes they will annoy others,
even our sisters and brothers.
Breaking these habits,
can be as bad as
chasing rabbits.


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 Reviews of "BreakingHabits"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 17, 2004
great write, grady! thanks for sharing! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
We are human, my friend...and humans
have bad habits. Great write my friend,
into the human mind. You see things within
us that others may not.
Excellent!

Love 'n Peace,
*Linda*


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