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Splinter
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Sharp slivers left behind..

Drops of blood ripple

 the waters of the dieing.

 An open wound..

Deep but not seen..

Wooden spears in the echoes

of this beating heart..

As hopelessness shatters dreams..

Ever so slowly drowning

in the bottomless black

of humanities blood filled ravine...

The heart always beating...

Yes, always bleeding..

Yet never....
                  Never seen.

 

  

    

 


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 Reviews of "Splinter"
Reviewed by Andrea Williams
Reviewed on March 23, 2015
Very deep.

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 25, 2007
I am not so sure this is dark as it is undeniably true...and sad.
This is a grand illustration of unseen and or ignored injury....whether on a personal level or world level. Well done, my friend.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 29, 2007
Isn't it so, as the splinter that hides beneath the skin giving one pain and yet so small that one cannot see it, only feel it's presence....your thoughts just like the heart that beats and bleeds from broken dreams and the hopelessness of life....

really nice work....

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2005
I hear you..


superb write!


Vesna:)

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Sad and all too real. Excellent. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Cles Wilson
Reviewed on July 27, 2005
This is good.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 29, 2005
Erica,

Some splinters run deeper than what healing will allow. Excellent writting.

Reviewed on June 27, 2005
A sense of hopelessness in this one. Good write.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 27, 2005
Very dark poetry like only you can do it!!

Well penned Erica....so good to read you again!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2005
Vwey dark! Well written.


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