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Smile of Innocence
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When your baby girl smiles to you while you are divorcing her mother, do you feel guilty?

He woke up depressed
Face so pale and tight
Eyes swollen and pregnant
Tears found their way out
He tried to wipe them dry
But the drizzle went on
They were uncontrollable
Looking upon him is his baby
She smiled to him as usual
But the day was quite unusual
a Decision awaited announcement
Dad and mom agreed to divorce
He watched the innocent flashes
He watched the innocent face
He had no option but to proceed
From the deck of a sinking ship
He watched the beauty of sunrise

 

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Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)
Reviewed on January 25, 2005
beautiful poetry such well expressed emotions completing the poetic voice of this gem!

Reviewed on December 6, 2004
Ah so very sad and poignant, So much truth and pain in this excellent poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on December 5, 2004
Sad write my friend...I hope this is only a fiction...all the best...love n luck...BHuwAN

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 4, 2004
This is sad but you tell it like it is, Abdi-Noor. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Heartwrenching From the deck of a sinking ship He watched the Beauty of sunrise. Breaks my heart.
God Bless You.
Warmest and Most Peaceful holidays and all days.
Tracey

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2004
If this is biographic ..then I'm sorry...whatever it is ..IT is a well written piece..


Vesna :)

Reviewed on November 28, 2004
Dear Abdi, I too hope that this is not a mirror of your life. May Peace and blessings be yours. It is a sad scenario played over and over again. Perhaps some marry for the wrong reasons, as children are elft to wonder if they somehow are at fault in later years.

Reviewed on November 28, 2004
(((abdi-noor)))

i do hope this is fictional. :( i pray for your family daily

painful write--exellently penned

(((HUGS))) and love and continued prayers, karla. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 28, 2004
Many innocent children eventually have to endure this same pain as they watch their parents separate, and it is always so so sad for all of them.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 28, 2004
when loved ones part, it's important for them to seek the help of a lifeboat for the sake of the child's survival ...

well penned!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 27, 2004
This is sad. I have a friend going through this now. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 27, 2004
Such a sad poem Abdi Noor, I hope it was not about you!
Take care...


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