Sadness like a ton of bricks
Kick starts my tear ducts
Pushing me into overdrive
As I navigate our relationship
Over a waterfall
On the brink of jealousy’s jungle
Beat of the Congo drum
In the tape deck
Playing a tune
Of lusts greediness
And my sharp tongue
I'm flipping over
Life flashes before my eyes
Memories of you
Loving me
Like I wanted
You knew how
And then we slipped
Reality got sucked
Into the muck
Of your desire
To be
Untameable
Always
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Reviewed by Angela Velez (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2003
deep and touching the words which you chose were perfect in everyway. absolutely perfect.
very deeply felt, strong word usage...sad times...
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2003
This is good--especially like:
"Sadness like a ton of bricks
Kick starts my tear ducts
Pushing me into overdrive
As I navigate our relationship
Over a waterfall"
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Chrissie
Kick starts my tear ducts
Pushing me into overdrive
As I navigate our relationship
Over a waterfall"
Love these lines, way to put that feeling into words. Well done
Tom
well done super girl they do bug but what-r-ya-gona-do?
"My Sweet Embraceable You," but we will call it "My Sweet Untameable You." Will that work? Bill
This one I agree with is very moving and excellent.
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Jack
"Sadness like a ton of bricks
Kick starts my tear ducts
Pushing me into overdrive
As I navigate our relationship
Over a waterfall"
~E
Reindeer
why do the girls always fall for the bad boys?