Such sadness in my heart
As our lives are torn apart
Here take it, take it all
Every bit of all that I recall
It was love that was shared
By two people who dared
We reached out across the sea
In a moment as if we were free
I may have lost that crazy dream
Of you my king and me your queen
But inside of me I still know this
Without ever needing to make a wish
Even though I’m not your lover or your wife
It is still my devotion you have for life
And if our paths should again cross mine
Here come closer as I tell you what you’ll find
A woman filled with joy and tears
Standing up to witches without any fears
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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
Why do you keep writing about my love life! LOL! Thank you...I feel your sad... Hugs, Teresa
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Only poetry can condense a world of philposophy as you have done in this work.
This well done write goes to the depths , tears at the guts of every woman who has ever felt rejection or neglect. though friends can help with being there, the real solution must come from within, and it isn't always easy.That's why positive energy forces are so necessary to keep in mind;)large doses of positive energy and affirmation of self-worth is what gets us through...
Hi sweetie <
"A woman filled with joy and tears
Standing up to witches without any fears "
this one is so good and yes the ending is excellent..... I know how it feels been here,,,
Love and hugs
Peggy
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Dear Dara, This writing I really like.
It is very discreptive. Deep down you show your tenderness, and then your strength. I think this poem is great.
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"A woman filled with joy and tears
Standing up to witches without any fears "
this one is so good and yes the ending is excellent..... I know how it feels been here,,,
Love and hugs
Peggy
It is very discreptive. Deep down you show your tenderness, and then your strength. I think this poem is great.
lyf
tony