Sounds like you have a good relationship and this poem paints a fine canvas of your journey together. Some fine lines like:"Oil based ochre
And cerulean blue..." And a GREAT TITLE! Enjoy the journey...
Later, michael guy
"A nuclear fusion
Bursts forth
Pushing our sails further out into an unexplored space
Hydrogen converts into lofty helium aspirations
As we drift in and out of trust
But always still finding us"
Wonderful writing!!
Oh, my dear - what a superb line that is! Love the poem, but honest to god, that line will linger in my mind for days.
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2003
You have ,it seems to me,examined a relationship very well without reducing the whole affair to cold analysis. The resulting wormth is almost palpable, the metaphors almost visible things.
Cryssa
Fee
And cerulean blue..." And a GREAT TITLE! Enjoy the journey...
Later, michael guy
this is my favorite of yours!!!
This is gentle, but has a trippy flavor.
pax
Anita
:)
Bursts forth
Pushing our sails further out into an unexplored space
Hydrogen converts into lofty helium aspirations
As we drift in and out of trust
But always still finding us"
Wonderful writing!!
This Is Better Than All !
TRASK
Oh, my dear - what a superb line that is! Love the poem, but honest to god, that line will linger in my mind for days.
Adam
Love
tinka
tony:)