the burden of finding happiness has become such a damn chore
i can ryhme
and i can climb
i can be the best
in your mission to loves conquest
but in the end i am just me
a woman divided in three
one for me
one for you
and one for who
...will one day love me
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Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
I guess a woman is always devided into at least 2 parts. That's our fate. Up to us whether we can cope with it.
Concentrate on the third part - the one that is prepared to go for the real love in your life. That should be the strongest one.
Nico
Reviewed by Shaw o' Inchrory
Reviewed on July 26, 2003
Hi Sara,
Not like you to get things wrong, that last line is way out.
Your old friend
Tomas
I love you...but now I am a woman..and that is not good enough...We want to be loved by a man...that kind of love is not for us to be soon!! So in the meantime just know I love you in my own special way as a friend...who shares your heartache Okay!!
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Super Girl,
This is sad {{{TEARS}}}
But there is always a day and one
Love PJ
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Concentrate on the third part - the one that is prepared to go for the real love in your life. That should be the strongest one.
Nico
Not like you to get things wrong, that last line is way out.
Your old friend
Tomas
Bobbi
Love
Tinka
This is sad {{{TEARS}}}
But there is always a day and one
Love PJ
one for you
and one for who
...will one day love me
and that day is near.. Awesome write!
Reindeer
Thanks for sharing and keep the faith your best days are ahead of you.
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