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A Good Fit
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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When he takes me in his arms
I sense a recoiling in me
It is more than him just not being you
There isn't a good fit



I still remember when you and I first met
How you held me close and tight
Like you never wanted to let go
We cried on each others shoulders
And just like you predicted
There wasn’t enough time
There never could be my darling
If we were meant to be together
All the time
Not just part time



Oh and his smell is all wrong
I don’t know
It is more than his strange cologne
He just isn’t you
And his kisses, well
He just doesn’t taste like he's mine



I miss you, baby


 


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 Reviews of "A Good Fit"
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
That's a great way of writing.
Excellent.
Nico

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Wonderfully written. I wish you all the happiness your loving heart desires.


tony:)

Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Heart felt poem.
LM

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Wonderful words of passion SG, great write! ~SH~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
sensational write....so unique!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
powerful yearning...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Heartfelt and so true Sara!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2003
Great write, and by the way, all the women in my life have taught me to respect women.


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