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Demanding a Retraction
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
  
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I started to write you a love letter
Only to finally realize better.
You are not worthy of my affections
Until you make some major concessions.

I need you to love me and love me some more.
To never, ever shove my love out the door.
Don’t waste time on words without action.
To psychologically abuse and then demand a retraction.

What I have to offer is priceless,
For those who enjoy being loved to excess.
So when you realize your heart is big enough for mine.
That's when we'll go forward, because they say love is blind.


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 Reviews of "Demanding a Retraction"
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on November 8, 2003
Well said Sara, love has to be comfortable for both involved it can't be a one way street. ~Z~

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2003
Excellent !
Nico

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2003
Fabulous rant, Sara! That's tellin' him! You have such a warm and giving heart, generous and kind... settle for nothing but his very best. I'm with Jay.. words are easy.. make him SHOW you! Wonderful piece! katy xox.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
so true. well written.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
Now that is going to cost ya!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
Yes, love is blind. And stupid. And ignorant. And hurtful. And . . . Yes, love is blind. And stupid. And ignorant. And hurtful. And . . . bee-you-tee-ful.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 6, 2003
Sara, You have to do what is best for you. Nobody or nothing can make your decisions for you. Just go with your heart. Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2003
O' Sara You are ready to move on girl...just do what ever your heart tells you...I have come to a crossroad myself...and I am telling you the dirt-roads are nasty....you get a puncture on all of them...some you can fix...but some are a blow-out...I know exactly how you feel!!
We have to get some extra spare-wheel I think...lol!! A trailor full!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 5, 2003
love can definitely be a contradition of terms...


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