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still me
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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to strangers you write volumes
carefully crafting your words with directness
meandering along a river of respect
to me your words are harsh
delivered perfunctorily
or less
just vacant
a conspiracy perhaps as my beauty becomes mummified
my impassioned pleas to matter go unheard
in the cold, dark vacuum of love gone awry
a revisit to an airless misdirected will to die
ever looks so promising
yet as your love dims its light
and in defiance of gravity
my core puffs up…billows swell
fission as explosive as fusion
I jettison away
less one heart
but still me


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Reviewed by Gary Gebert
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
It is easy to express to others you seldom see, positive words. The trick is to do the same to those around you everyday and mean it. Enjoyed the choice of words.

Gary

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Blew me awayyyyyyyyyyyyyy

yet as your love dims its light
and in defiance of gravity
my core puffs up…billows swell
fission as explosive as fusion
I jettison away
less one heart
but still me


pax........A
:)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Powerful message; wonderful graphic.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on March 6, 2004
Why is it when I read this I pictured a child cowering in a dark corner? I surely hope that is not what I'm suppose to see. If they can't show you and your heart respect they don't need them! Excellent write Sara..Lisa

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Some excellent images.

"a conspiracy perhaps as my beauty becomes mummified"

Love it!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Passionately wise in truth expressed, Sara. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
I love it when you puff your core!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 5, 2004
Beautiful art Sara!!

The poem negative.......and heartfelt girl!!

Miss you!!

Love Tinka


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