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Feel like a Simile Sometimes.
by Lonnie Hicks → (All Poetry by Lonnie Hicks)
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The simile is taken as a comment upon society.

 

 

I feel like a train sometimes

that can't get no locomotin'

My wheels lumber

and my Ideals get stuck in sideways roller motions.

 

I feel like the moon sometimes

beautiful but dead.
 

Feel like thinking sometimes

but get tangled up in emotions.
 

Feel like a bird sometimes

remembering how to soar.
 

Feel like sleeping sometimes

not getting up,

being in bed for a while.

 

Feel like Christmas when

someone gives me a smile.
 

Feel like feeling more

on certain days and times.
 

Feel like talking deep

and thinking light;

laughing loud and quiet.

 

Feel like feeling like

my best days

sometimes.
 

Feel like is feeling like

if a good poem rhymes

sometimes.

 

Feel like is feeling like

if the rhythm beats in time,

if my heart skips to music quips

and rejoins at the metered line.

 

Feeling like

is feeling like

feeling is ok;

 

but feeling good or bad

without that like
and similies

is better;

well..

like superior.

Like ok?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Feel like a Simile Sometimes."
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 4, 2014

enjoyed reading your informative narrative

I look forward to reading more of your work.

m


Reviewed on July 21, 2011
I feel all of that too sometimes, a poem of great relatedness


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