Everything can be
taken away from me
but not the grandeur
of your smiles.
They are gorgeous.
Not only a flower
but the flowers
of the flowers,
are they.
Beloved!
Smile evermore
for in your smiles
there is everything
that I had lost
in those serpentine
bends of my life.
And my heart
lightened by your smile
is brighter than the sky
ignited by the million stars.
Everything can be taken indeed, but true smiles will and can forever imprint upon a soul. May the smile forever delight and light your path, if ever, you feel you are losing your way. May you be forevered blessed with the guiding smaile.
beautiful poetry the emotions in this is so beautiful....
HUGS to all Love n Luck always poet friend.....
Love,
LP
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2004
Just know Bhuwan that young and old they will come and go to listen to you speak. Some like the matron in your picture will find you handsome and shiek. So far away in other lands - they look at you and say they understand your dynamic presence as their juices flow. But in their serpentine minds they unravel as up their bodies the electricity travels. They seek you out and pretend it is only a philosophical bend. But the mirror tells its tale as they throw out their lasso. Your among the heady maidens in the sky. Love them and let them fly. For they live their yesterdays - and you search for your tomorrows. Your friend Bill
You capture a beautiful snapshot here, Bhuwan, and, like photography, will be something that lives on forever - like you say of poetry in your Biog. ..."for in your smiles there is everything that I had lost in those serpentine bends of my life" - these thoughts are magnificent and lofty, and yet expressed with such gentle ease and sincere tenderness. Like a sudden and eagerly-awaited view of the sea having travelled a dry and barren land, this is satisfying and breathtaking. TY Kate xx
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
Everything can be taken indeed, but true smiles will and can forever imprint upon a soul. May the smile forever delight and light your path, if ever, you feel you are losing your way. May you be forevered blessed with the guiding smaile.
Fantastic poetry.
warm hugs
Elga
this is beautiful
TY again Bhuwan, great to see you back.
~Contesse~
you are missed! So good to read you Bhuwan!;-)
Nice to see you around my friend!!
Love Tinka
beautiful poetry the emotions in this is so beautiful....
HUGS to all Love n Luck always poet friend.....
Love,
LP
So Nice to see you posting!
Silent words spoken are just as good as
The words that are spoken aloud.
The unspoken words of a smile
speak a thousand words of...
Love.
Sandie May Angel