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Suspenders?
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Some people believe ALL THINGS are pre-ordained, that we are simply puppets. What use would freewill be to a puppet?
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Have you heard the notion
that we've no emotion--
are puppets dangling?
Where are our suspenders?
I haven't a rod,
go where I want, trod ...
so where are the strings?

Don't you feel in control?
Do you need 'Depends', 'go'?
A puppet wouldn't know!
I have no suspenders.
No one makes me speak
(though I often 'squeak')--
a human being.

If one hangs o'er a ledge,
if they drop o'er the edge
will they shatter jumping?
Will 'bungees' catch, save her?
If I'd strings, they're cut;
I speak from my gut
about ev'rything.

As to that odd notion
that folks are but puppets,
freewill comes without strings.


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 Reviews of "Suspenders?"
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 7, 2004
Message resonates! Nicely crafted verse.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Excellent point at the end of this write.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Well donr Sandy!! I loved your E book : )

Jack

Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Excellent thought here about freewill.
We have it but so many will not use it and feel the need to stay on the strings. I say cut the strings use your freewill and live with the out come but also learn from it.
Tommy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 27, 2004
insightful and well written ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Good message, Sandy. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
Brilliant write, Poet!!! I enjoyed this one Sandy!!!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
It is not that we don't have free will Sandra. It is tht the powerful, politically, monetarily, and thos with the power; can subverte our free will in many ways so we are deceived into thining we have free will. Hopefully we do in our personal lives and the lives of our family and especially our chilldren. May God bless you Sandra. Bill


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