Rails rattlin’,
smoke risin’,
wheels clackin’,
bells dingin’,
birds flyin’,
steam hissin’,
brakes squealin’,
teen speedin’,
whistle trillin’,
man runnin’,
siren wailin’,
men cussin’
“no warnin’
train comin’!”
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Reviews of "Train Comin'"
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
this trained me overLOL hee hee this was awesome and captured your imagionation it was fantastic great job on this one
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
I love this Sandra...I love the sound of a train...especially at night when we are sleeping...but we dont have one close by..floria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
Funny. Would you believe here in Phoenix, I've seen exactly two freight trains. Both the same week. My first in 8 years living here. I thought they went the way of the pony express. [smiles]
Cute poem.
~E
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2003
Dear Sandy, That was quick and witty. Lots of fun. I say a real train:)
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My second book is about a boy who has Asperger's Syndrome and is bullied to the point to where he shoots up his school. I have divided the excerpts from it into three parts: Before, during and after the shooting.
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Cute poem.
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