This is extremely good. Especially if it's your first try. I always thought Haiku had to be 5, 7, 5, like yours. That's the way I've always written them. But, I'm learing more on AD.
In this fourth and final installment the intrepid crew is taken to the limits of their endurance as they brave a subterranean world filled with dangers and bizarre wonders. When Thurid’s warriors are defeated the crew frees the Grettig family from ca