I'm letting go,
and trusting that you will hold me,
head above the current,
where I'm swimming,
and feeling everything.
Because I took that chance
in taking your hand.
And now
the only holding I'm doing
is onto you.
But the water is so convincing
in it's perfect darkness.
Which one of you will win.
Beautiful expression, and somehow I didn't read this as dark, I took as an expression of love, and the elusiveness of it all!But what do I know? I write "dark" from what I am told, though I never really seen it that way. Anyway, I am rambling, its early and I need coffee! lol! I really love the way this sounds, and the visual it gives...
"But the water is so convincing
in it's perfect darkness."
That is so poetic!!
This is too real. don't hope it make it be the woman! Excellent depth of feeling conveyed!
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
God Jason, I felt this
to my toes. Very deep
emotions here...some I
can very much identfy
with. Sometimes those
dark waters are surrounding
me. If theres a hand reaching
out to
you in the darkness
hold it tight. Let it
be your lifeline thru
the storm.
Kim Jong Eun è morto. L'esercito nordcoreano è ora al comando. Il loro nuovo dittatore militare, il maresciallo Ko, crede che con un'invasione totale possano raggiungere Seul, a sole 35 miglia di distanza.
Book 5, the final story in the Wilderness Series--A marvelous and fantastic journey, enjoy little known history crafted with original, brilliant unforgettable moments, unforgettable characters, and an unforgettable adventure that will keep you shakin
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~Nikki~
Beautiful expression, and somehow I didn't read this as dark, I took as an expression of love, and the elusiveness of it all!But what do I know? I write "dark" from what I am told, though I never really seen it that way. Anyway, I am rambling, its early and I need coffee! lol! I really love the way this sounds, and the visual it gives...
"But the water is so convincing
in it's perfect darkness."
That is so poetic!!
Maria
Peace,
Cherokee
Reindeer
to my toes. Very deep
emotions here...some I
can very much identfy
with. Sometimes those
dark waters are surrounding
me. If theres a hand reaching
out to
you in the darkness
hold it tight. Let it
be your lifeline thru
the storm.
Huggs
~~Linda~~